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Thoughts About Love

Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "A Stroll Through a Dating Event"
My Collection of Love Poetry

10 total reviews 
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written cascade poem about meeting places where we can possibly meet a new friend. The friend we will meet there will have at leas one interest to share with us.

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 15-Nov-2018
    Thanks Sandra, I appreciate your kind review
    Hugs,Trisha
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Hi, Trisha,

Thank you for sharing this cascade poetry dealing with the realities of the dating scene. We used to liken' it to 'meat markets,' but I can see where 'garage sales' come into play with the mixed up parts of broken marriages, widows, and the disenfranchised.

Tough place to be,

~MP~

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 15-Nov-2018
    maybe ?meat market? will be my next poem LOL Thanks for reviewing
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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LOL! Okay, I seriously laughed out loud at your cascade here -- this is a winner in my book and I know there's no competition!!! :) ;) Just the reality of 'cat fights' of women over available men like they were merchandise at a garage sale is hilarious. It is also an almost sobering look at the overall cultural shift that is trying denigrate 'men' in favor of 'woman power' .... don't get that whole mentality but I love the satirical eye with which your write here could be viewed! :) ;) Either way - a wonderful write! :) ;) Thank you for sharing! :) ;) Yvette :)

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
    What a wonderful review! Thank you so much. I?m honored that you got so much out of reading my Cascade

    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Pearl Edwards
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Great comparison (though I've been out of that game for over 50 years, so what would I know LOL) Great Cascade as you walk us through the dating game. Left me smiling,
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
    It?s a distant activity for me as well! Thank you so much for your positive review.
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Donka Kristeva
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That looks like a challenging poetry format but you have met it with ovations, that is successfully. And you seem to have had fun with it. So did I, reading it.

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
    It was challenging! The old brain needs exercise LOL Thanks for your complimentary review
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Lady Jane
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Good to see ya, dear. It's been a while. What an interesting take on the Cascade format of poetry. I LOVE your analogy to the dating scene, Lol. Love the presentation, the format, the content. It all worked for me :) Keep em coming.
janelle

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
    Hi Janelle, thanks for your very complimentary review of my cascade poetry. I?m glad you enjoyed reading it
    Hugs,Trisha
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
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This is a fantastic Cascade poem. Well done! Reading your poetry, I could very easily see the comparison between dating and garage sales. We're always trying to find that rare gem, the one everybody wants.

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
    Thank you very much! Your positive, kind review added to my good day
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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You did a good job with your cascade for potlatch, Bucketlist. I like the color scheme. Your topic is well-expressed. Your repeating line fits in nicely as does the picture. Thank you for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
    Thanks Jan, your position as club leader makes your review extra important to me.
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Debbie Pope
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I am smiling so big. You did it, and it is wonderful. It's one of the funniest poems that I have ever read. The analogy is priceless--much too valuable for your typical garage sale.
I really like your line that "unused status is a bonus find." Ain't that the truth!
I like the format that you chose for your satire. And, your title is great.
This was so much fun. I bet you will get a great response.

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
    Thank you so much my friend. I?m just happy that you enjoyed the end poem from your suggestion of course I was honored at the six stars.
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from kiwijenny
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Wow this is kinda true... a diamond in the rough. Few new unblemished people out there to choose from.
Good metaphor I have never thought of before.
Well penned poem
God bless

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018
    Thanks for your supportive review and compliments
    Hugs, Trisha