A Moment of Sudden Understanding
The confession of a bad review23 total reviews
Comment from Ulla
Hi Phillip. I give you a six for this because I know how much work you put into bettering your writing. You male mistakes. But don't we all? Keep working at and act on the advise when you get it. You do write some great stories.
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Go for it. Kind regards. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018
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Hi Phillip. I give you a six for this because I know how much work you put into bettering your writing. You male mistakes. But don't we all? Keep working at and act on the advise when you get it. You do write some great stories.
The condition causes the head of want-to-be-writers to swells= to swell
Go for it. Kind regards. Ulla:))
Comment Written 11-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018
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Thanks for your encouragement, Ulla. I will always have mistakes because I'm really new at this writing. My youth was ill-spent.
Phillip
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Your write is honest and from the heart Phillip, we none of us may become great writers, but we are all individuals who can express ourselves in our own timeline and we have a right to do that in our own way, we are all on a journey and we like to record our hopes, fears, joys, happiness in our ever changing lives, always put pen to paper because we are all listening, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018
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Your write is honest and from the heart Phillip, we none of us may become great writers, but we are all individuals who can express ourselves in our own timeline and we have a right to do that in our own way, we are all on a journey and we like to record our hopes, fears, joys, happiness in our ever changing lives, always put pen to paper because we are all listening, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 11-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018
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Thanks, Dolly. I know no better what to grow conceptually. I have a lot of respect for writers. They are the alert individuals who share what I, many times, don't see.
Phillip
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Philip. It's true. Your writing does need a lot of fixing grammatically. However, your writing does have merit because it's real and heartfelt. Perhaps you're more of a storyteller than you think. I've read your work which is straightforward and interesting even though there are errors. Just keep plugging away at your craft. I believe we must write for ourselves. If others enjoy it, too, that's a bonus. Marilyn
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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018
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Hi Philip. It's true. Your writing does need a lot of fixing grammatically. However, your writing does have merit because it's real and heartfelt. Perhaps you're more of a storyteller than you think. I've read your work which is straightforward and interesting even though there are errors. Just keep plugging away at your craft. I believe we must write for ourselves. If others enjoy it, too, that's a bonus. Marilyn
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Comment Written 11-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018
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Thanks, Marilyn. I will continue to have many errors because my youth was ill-spent. Thanks for saying my pieces are interesting, too. That means a lot.
Phillip
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You're welcome. :)
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K.
