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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem about the beauty of God all around is we can see it, hear it,
smell it, touch it, and taste it every day of our lives wherever we are, we can find it anywhere.

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 12-Nov-2018
    Hi, Sandra. Thank you for your kind review.
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Hi, Trisha,

Yes. All we need to prove the existence of God is our five senses. By looking, smelling, listening, tasting, and touching we can assure ourselves of His presence.

~MP~

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018
    It seems so lame and obvious to even bring up the senses Yet, without them, the world?s beauty would be lost. Thanks for reviewing,
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from fm wright
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So much put into so few words. It flowed beautifully in thought and works well as a whole sentence and I like the ending words to each line. A wonderfully written piece. The artwork matched it so well.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018
    Thank you for your complimentary review
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Anntonette
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Great alliteration at the beginning of this piece, alliteration being my favorite poetic device. You know a lot about God than I do, take that as a compliment :)) I couldn't have said it better myself.
Keep God in your heart and keep on writing!
- Anntonette J

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018
    Yup! He?s there. It?s hard to understand why there?s so much hurt . My poetry has been a wonderful purging tool from my heart to try and deal with that personally thanks very much for your kind review
    Hugs,Trisha
Comment from Wetbelly01
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So true!... I couldn't have said t better myself.
I didn't come across any pesky 'glitches' along the way.
My compliments on a fine written piece!

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018
    Hi, I appreciated your complimentary review
    Hugs Trisha
reply by Wetbelly01 on 11-Nov-2018
    You're very welcome!
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018
    Cheers!
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-I like the artwork and presentation, Trish.
-The syllable count is good.
-Effective use of one continuous thought.
-The alliteration adds to the
meaning in your poem.
-He does allow us to enjoy
the things around us each day.
-Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018
    You got me again! I do appreciate you editing my poem. I never used to make these snafus, old age has arrived! I?m glad you enjoyed the content.
    Hugs,Trisha
reply by Pam (respa) on 11-Nov-2018
    It wasn't a big thing, but I didn't want someone to lower the rating because of it. I took out the note in the review. The content was very good, Trisha.