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Botched Feminist

a personal view on feminism... a free verse

58 total reviews 
Comment from evesayshi
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In my opinion, an accurate portrayal of some women advocates today - unpleasant as the description is - well constructed and depicted in dramatic clarity - an important and relevant write in striking and fluid free verse. Thank you for sharing this remarkable write...

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 13-Nov-2018
    Thanks a lot for this perceptive review. Thanks too, for the generous five stars.
reply by evesayshi on 13-Nov-2018
    You are very welcome - an important write...Eve
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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I think it's a sad state of affairs when women degrade the mere idea of being a woman. I am proud to be one, and I don't have to strip naked to prove it. What is that all about? Totally stupid. I just hope they don't find themselves trying to explain to their children and grandchildren why they would even want to do that if they are shown the picture. Well done, your writing is strong and hard hitting. :) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 13-Nov-2018
    Thanks a lot Sandra for sharing my views. I just hope more people will wake up and value more the gift of rational debate and sensible dialogue rather that vulgarity and indecency to make a point. God bless.Susan
Comment from Pantygynt
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I am not sure what the message is from the 'feminists' in the picture apart from the obvious biological exposure they seem pretty far removed from femininity. I have come across a few of these femininists in my time , fully clothed I might add. Some of them seemed decidedly shallow people to me.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 13-Nov-2018
    Thanks a lot for this intelligent review. Thanks too, for the generous five stars.
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
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I mean more power to them for being so comfortable in their skin they can do this? I certainly couldn't go running around basically naked but maybe that's just me. You did a great job with this

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 13-Nov-2018
    Thanks a lot my friend for this perceptive review. Like you I cannot use my nakedness to drive home a point. I still believe in the value of rational debate and sensible dialogue. God bless. Susan
Comment from nomi338
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As an African American who reached legal maturity in the 60s, I fully understand protest and the different shades it may take on. The biggest lesson or takeaway for me is that, in order for me to get what I want, you do not have to relinquish what you have. Yours is yours and mine is mine and the two never have to meet. The only time we will ever have a problem between us is when you try to prevent me from getting and keeping what is mine.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 13-Nov-2018
    Thanks a lot for responding to the message of this poem. Thanks too, for the generous five stars.. God bless.
Comment from Mastery
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Wow! LOL Hey, Susan. This is sure a blast for the past and future, I think. LOL Strong verbs used throughout to convey your point and a good job of it:

"I don't really understand
her bold, tinted signature
re-writing women's history
with oblique ideology"

Bravo, my friend. Bob

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 13-Nov-2018
    Again my friend, thanks a lot for appreciating the merits of this humble piece. God bless. Susan
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
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Hi Nassus, your views on the feminist movement of today are made very clear. Very well written and on reading your author notes I am inclined to agree with you. I enjoyed your read very much - warm regards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 13-Nov-2018
    Thanks a lot Dorothy for appreciating the merits of this humble piece. God bless. Susan
Comment from jenintorre
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O.M.G. and to think I thought I was being cool and radical by getting my ears peirced at 60. I agree with every word you say. This is feminism gone much too far. Best wishes. Jen.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 13-Nov-2018
    Jen, it is not cool to be vulgar and indecent just to make a point and win an argument. I cannot imagine my daughter running around the house naked or in hooker outfit just to make a point.That's quite irrational to me. Grown up adults don't act like spoiled little children. I still believe in the value of a rational debate.God bless.
Comment from Sally Law
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I thought I had lost you! I'm going to Fan you right now so I never you lose you again. I remember you did an excellent article on President Trump. I will never forget it! This is par excellance and very telling of what a wonderful writer you are. You really get down to the heart of the matter in everything. I could hardly look at the photo though. It is very real.
I hope you're well and good,
Sally

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 13-Nov-2018
    Oh my, thanks a a lot Sally. You really made my day. With more people like you who still believe in the value of decency, there is still hope for America to turn around to the Christian values for which America was founded. God bless my friend. SDusan
Comment from Heather Knight
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I love your poem and the picture is quite shocking to be frank.
I guess there are all kinds of feminists nowadays.
My daughter is 23 and I cannot imagine her attending that kind of demonstration.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 13-Nov-2018
    Thanks a lot for sharing my views. With more people like you, the future of America is bright for the next generations to come. God bless. Susan