Sweet Song of Spring
How Spring always sings to me.40 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
I love your poem...the wording is just beautiful...
your description of Spring...stunning...and I love your picture...so very nicely written...Good Luck in the contest...love Linda xxoo
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I love your poem...the wording is just beautiful...
your description of Spring...stunning...and I love your picture...so very nicely written...Good Luck in the contest...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 08-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2018
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Thank you, Linda, for your wonderful praise of "Sweet Song of Spring."
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you are so very welcome...love xxoo
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the beauty and wonderful energy Spring brings to us when the first new leaves appear and new life seems to starts everywhere in nature.
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A very well-written poem about the beauty and wonderful energy Spring brings to us when the first new leaves appear and new life seems to starts everywhere in nature.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2018
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Thank you so much, Sandra, for sharing "Sweet Song of Spring" and your kind praise.
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a lovely poem - beautifully rendered in its smooth and lyric rhyming rhythm - although not vested in the form, I am particularly captivated by the illustrative and easy rhyming rhythm - fully compliant with the prompt. Best of luck in the contest...
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2018
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In my opinion, a lovely poem - beautifully rendered in its smooth and lyric rhyming rhythm - although not vested in the form, I am particularly captivated by the illustrative and easy rhyming rhythm - fully compliant with the prompt. Best of luck in the contest...
Comment Written 08-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2018
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Thank you so much, evesayshi, for your wonderful praise of "Sweet Song of Spring."
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You are very welcome indeed - my pleasure...Eve
Comment from fm wright
A beautifully written poem expressing the beauty of spring. The rhyme, rhythm and thought all flow wonderfully together. I like the photo you chose along with the font. All I can do is wish you the best with this entry in the contest!
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A beautifully written poem expressing the beauty of spring. The rhyme, rhythm and thought all flow wonderfully together. I like the photo you chose along with the font. All I can do is wish you the best with this entry in the contest!
Comment Written 08-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2018
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I am delighted you enjoyed "Sweet Song of Spring" so much and truly appreciate your very kind praise.
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You are truly welcome!
Comment from Donka Kristeva
"Spring's hymn of peace.." The whole first stanza- my favourite- has lovely images of nature awakened and in full display. I think of this poem as Ode to Spring... Rhyme flows, and yes, the lines are as if singing of the new born beauty.
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"Spring's hymn of peace.." The whole first stanza- my favourite- has lovely images of nature awakened and in full display. I think of this poem as Ode to Spring... Rhyme flows, and yes, the lines are as if singing of the new born beauty.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2018
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Indeed "Sweet Song of Spring" is like an ode to Spring. Many thanks, Donka, for sharing and your very kind praise.
Comment from BermyBye50
This is a magnificent portrait of the writer's favorite season. A picturesque description of Spring flows throughout this well written write. The poem is sun-soaked with wonderful imagery and excellent rhymes. It has a melodic sense and feel which the writer has infused in every perfectly chosen word. Let us all sing to the glory of Spring.
All the best in the contest
Eugene
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This is a magnificent portrait of the writer's favorite season. A picturesque description of Spring flows throughout this well written write. The poem is sun-soaked with wonderful imagery and excellent rhymes. It has a melodic sense and feel which the writer has infused in every perfectly chosen word. Let us all sing to the glory of Spring.
All the best in the contest
Eugene
Comment Written 08-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2018
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I am thrilled by your enthusiastic response to "Sweet Song of Sorubg," Eugene, and can't thank you enough for the high praise and that galaxy of bright stars.
Comment from nancyjam
I love this beautiful description of Spring. The images are lovely
and inspire peaceful reflection.
As this form is new to me, I appreciate learning it from your wonderful example.
I wish you the best in the contest. Nancy
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I love this beautiful description of Spring. The images are lovely
and inspire peaceful reflection.
As this form is new to me, I appreciate learning it from your wonderful example.
I wish you the best in the contest. Nancy
Comment Written 08-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2018
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Thank you so much, Nancy, for your kind praise of "Sweet Song of Spring." The Hill & Dale is a new form for me, too, and was fun to work with.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello anon, a well written poem in a new form to me. Hill and Dale - you have written your poem true to form and it is beautifully rhymed with good rhythm. A bit like a Limerick in its form. A very eye-catching picture in a lovely setting. Good Luck - warm regards Dorothy x
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Hello anon, a well written poem in a new form to me. Hill and Dale - you have written your poem true to form and it is beautifully rhymed with good rhythm. A bit like a Limerick in its form. A very eye-catching picture in a lovely setting. Good Luck - warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 08-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2018
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Thank you so much, Dorothy, for sharing "Sweet Song of Spring" and your gracious comments. It was a new form to me, too, and fun to work with.
Comment from Ogden
Hmm. "Hill and Dale." Live and learn. There is more to your rhapsodizing than meets the eye of the uninitiated.
Artfully done.
Ogden (Call me Don)
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Hmm. "Hill and Dale." Live and learn. There is more to your rhapsodizing than meets the eye of the uninitiated.
Artfully done.
Ogden (Call me Don)
Comment Written 08-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2018
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Hi, Don. I am so pleased you shared my Hill & Dale and enjoyed it.
Comment from Lady Jane
Love this spring time write. The carefully chosen rhyme and clean verbiage make the flow and feel of this piece delicate and beautiful. Perfect cadence also.
The color/font choice add to the overall Spring content and the image was an excellent choice. This style of poetry I have not yet wandered upon but am quite intrigued by. I just might try it sometime ;-)
I wish you the best of love with this perfect penning, in my humble opinion, of course. Love that second stanza- just wow! The tone and rich imagery are just powerful.
Janelle
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2018
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Love this spring time write. The carefully chosen rhyme and clean verbiage make the flow and feel of this piece delicate and beautiful. Perfect cadence also.
The color/font choice add to the overall Spring content and the image was an excellent choice. This style of poetry I have not yet wandered upon but am quite intrigued by. I just might try it sometime ;-)
I wish you the best of love with this perfect penning, in my humble opinion, of course. Love that second stanza- just wow! The tone and rich imagery are just powerful.
Janelle
Comment Written 08-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2018
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I am thrilled by your enthusiastic response to "Sweet Song of Spring," Janelle. Many thanks for taking the time to specify exactly what you like about the poem the most.
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good luck ;-)
