Thank you, Helen Keller
A Senryu14 total reviews
Comment from Kelly Grim
Aww.. this is really great! The kicker is the last line, of course! I just wish more people had taken this lesson to heart! I think this is an excellent write in response to the contest prompt! Good luck!
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2018
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Aww.. this is really great! The kicker is the last line, of course! I just wish more people had taken this lesson to heart! I think this is an excellent write in response to the contest prompt! Good luck!
Comment Written 06-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2018
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Appreciate very much your dropping by to read and share your insights on my senryu on Helen Keller. She was a remarkable woman,
Comment from Lady Jane
Yes, Helen Keller is infamous for accomplishing what many deemed to be a miracle back in the day. She learned to read and write and speak DESPITE her illness. She was determined. Much can be learned from her fortitude. Excellent choice for senryu topic. Nothing to detract a star for. Good syllabic count and content. Great photo. Wish you the best of luck with this short piece.
Janelle
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2018
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Yes, Helen Keller is infamous for accomplishing what many deemed to be a miracle back in the day. She learned to read and write and speak DESPITE her illness. She was determined. Much can be learned from her fortitude. Excellent choice for senryu topic. Nothing to detract a star for. Good syllabic count and content. Great photo. Wish you the best of luck with this short piece.
Janelle
Comment Written 06-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2018
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Appreciate very much your dropping by to read and share your insights on my senryu on Helen Keller. She was a remarkable woman,
Comment from Y. M. Roger
She truly was a remarkable woman who never let the world get her down...really would love to see more of her spirit in the youth of today!! :) ;) Thank you for sharing such a lovely person in your heartfelt and touching write! :)
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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2018
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She truly was a remarkable woman who never let the world get her down...really would love to see more of her spirit in the youth of today!! :) ;) Thank you for sharing such a lovely person in your heartfelt and touching write! :)
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Comment Written 06-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2018
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Appreciate very much your dropping by to read and share your insights on my senryu on Helen Keller. She was a remarkable woman,
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation,
in addition to a wonderful
person to write about.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-The syllable count is good,
and you have effectively
used one continuous thought.
-The message is a good one, as well.
-Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2018
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-Very nice image and presentation,
in addition to a wonderful
person to write about.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-The syllable count is good,
and you have effectively
used one continuous thought.
-The message is a good one, as well.
-Good luck in the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2018
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Appreciate very much your dropping by to read and share your insights on my senryu on Helen Keller. She was a remarkable woman,
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You are welcome. She was a very remarkable woman.
