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Magicians

Deception is their job

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Comment from Neonewman
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Amen!!!!
This little, masterfully crafted piece speaks volumes of truth. This one should bode very well in this particular contest my friend. Thank you for sharing.
God bless
Steve

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2018
    Thank you very much for your encouraging review
reply by Neonewman on 07-Nov-2018
    My pleasure
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
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Hello Kaypot, this is a well written 5/7/5 poem, in perfect form. Very cleverly worded - a political statement which makes a good entry to the contest. Good Luck - and warm regards Dorothy

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2018
    Thank you very much, much appreciated
Comment from Boogienights
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This is excellent and I agree that most words out of their mouths are mumble jumble. I did vote but I don't have much hope that change will happen...thanks for sharing what I'm sure many are thinking.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2018
    Thank you very much, and we can only hope
Comment from Shanbreen
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Your poem says it all. But calling them magicians gives their lies and false promises, legitimacy -- nothing wrong with magic, is it? =). But I know what you are saying. The poem is well written.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2018
    Thank you very much, and no nothing wrong with magicians they are fun
Comment from RGstar
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Speak of magicians, I am very interested. The funny thing is, as soon as I saw the title of this, I knew it was about politicians, and I understand your rhetoric here.

The only problem, their magic is rapidly becoming potent...in a negative way.
Best wishes.
RGstar

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2018
    Thank you very much, and unfortunately you are right
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 5-7-5, Magicians, has the right set up and definitely points at the tricksters of the legislature and executive palaces as the liars and manipulators they either are, or are training to be.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2018
    Thank you very much, and yes that is what they are trained for
Comment from Pamusart
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Hi kahpot. Nice to finally see a post by you. This looks like a good entry for the contest. I am finding out that the world is well aware of the corruption in the trump administration. Probably more aware than almost half of the people in the states. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2018
    Thank you very much, and it is good to be back
Comment from Mastery
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Bravo! Good entry here, my friend. LOL You nailed it. I think you have a very good chance with this entry in te contest. Excellent satori, Kahpot. I love the art work too.Bob

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2018
    Wow! thank you very much for your very encouraging review
Comment from Dean Kuch
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Yes, it's that time again and another four years has passed, kahpot.
I just finished voting, only moments ago.
All we can do as patriotic, law abiding citizens is become as well informed as humanly possible as it pertains to the the agenda each candidate had laid out for themselves and their constituents.
Good luck in the 5-7-5 poetry contest.
~Dean

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2018
    Thank you very much, and all we can do now is wait
reply by Dean Kuch on 06-Nov-2018
    You are welcome.
Comment from papa55mike
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It's amazing the craziness that's happening in the US these days. I've seen some of the dirtiest politics by unnamed groups (Trump). What a historical time we live in.

Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2018
    Thank you very much, much appreciated