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House left to decay.26 total reviews
Comment from aryr
This was so refreshing to read Kay, it was well worded with a good rhyme pattern. I liked the picture very much. It spoke of a truth that even old and worn out things could be revived and enjoyed (even people). Thanks so much for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018
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This was so refreshing to read Kay, it was well worded with a good rhyme pattern. I liked the picture very much. It spoke of a truth that even old and worn out things could be revived and enjoyed (even people). Thanks so much for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018
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Hello my friend, thanks so much for reading and glad you enjoyed. I don't know about us being revived...I wish. love, Kay.
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You are so welcome Kay, okay then how about we are refreshed slightly.
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Especially when the boobs bounce on the knees! XXK.
Comment from Galactia
HI
Excellent written poem, Glad to be back to read your poems again. I am sure your poem is talking about my house..old run down house that's been re-generated and different families in the past moving in as nd out.
You certainly brought your house to life through your poem. House feeling alone.
Great job and Good Luck
Regards
Tia
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018
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HI
Excellent written poem, Glad to be back to read your poems again. I am sure your poem is talking about my house..old run down house that's been re-generated and different families in the past moving in as nd out.
You certainly brought your house to life through your poem. House feeling alone.
Great job and Good Luck
Regards
Tia
Comment Written 04-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018
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Hi Tia, Long time no hear? Thanks so much for reading, glad you enjoyed. Nothing compares to bring a house back from the dead! Love, Kay.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written, beautiful poem you have penned that is six stars in my eyes. You used great descriptive words that told a story. Here are my favorite stanzas:
Brightly painted house on hill
Lit from inside, merry face
Family laughing, joy, never still
Hard to keep up the jolly race
Fire dancing in my heart
Christmas coming soon to be
Never sad I be, home so smart
Family lives as part of me.
Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018
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This is a very well written, beautiful poem you have penned that is six stars in my eyes. You used great descriptive words that told a story. Here are my favorite stanzas:
Brightly painted house on hill
Lit from inside, merry face
Family laughing, joy, never still
Hard to keep up the jolly race
Fire dancing in my heart
Christmas coming soon to be
Never sad I be, home so smart
Family lives as part of me.
Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 04-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018
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Hello Teri, Thanks for reading and enjoying. Glad you liked the theme, something different eh? Love, Kay.
Comment from patcelaw
Aussie, this is a well written poem. My heart too has a fire dancing within. Dancing with love hope, kindness and so many other lovely dances. Through many trials I have chosen to be happy and know there is a rainbow coming after the rain. Patricia
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018
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Aussie, this is a well written poem. My heart too has a fire dancing within. Dancing with love hope, kindness and so many other lovely dances. Through many trials I have chosen to be happy and know there is a rainbow coming after the rain. Patricia
Comment Written 04-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018
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Hello Patricia, The Bible says, "when we are weak, then we are strong." I agree with you, takes more muscles to frown than smile. Keep being happy and I'll join you! Love, Kay.
Comment from Sanku
It is a cute story that you have written in this poem.Poor house ,empty devoid of a family's laughter and bater.
Brilliant idea .It should be in the home page.
The last stanza made me sigh.
Imagine If there really is a soul for a house...
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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018
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It is a cute story that you have written in this poem.Poor house ,empty devoid of a family's laughter and bater.
Brilliant idea .It should be in the home page.
The last stanza made me sigh.
Imagine If there really is a soul for a house...
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Comment Written 04-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018
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Oooh, I believe houses take on the energy of the families living in them. Glad you liked, thanks for reading. Love, Kay.
Comment from tfawcus
I do like this. Told from the point of view of the house, it reflects what must be the case in many parts of the country, where natural disasters have struck. Your story of repair is not only repair of a house but repair of a community.
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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018
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I do like this. Told from the point of view of the house, it reflects what must be the case in many parts of the country, where natural disasters have struck. Your story of repair is not only repair of a house but repair of a community.
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Comment Written 04-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018
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Thank you for reading and so glad you liked it. Something different. Blessings, Kay.
