Please come Home
House left to decay.26 total reviews
Comment from Anntonette
This is a good way to express deep emotions like this. Saddened but there Is hope in the end. Love how you chose that house for the image , it sits alone, all alone. I would recommend changing the color of the background to something gloomy too. Relatable read!
- Anntonette J
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2018
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This is a good way to express deep emotions like this. Saddened but there Is hope in the end. Love how you chose that house for the image , it sits alone, all alone. I would recommend changing the color of the background to something gloomy too. Relatable read!
- Anntonette J
Comment Written 07-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2018
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Hello Anntonette, Thanks so much for reading and your kind comments. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from kahpot
Excellent and yes how family can fill that hole and mend those steps when we need a lift, and with Christmas coming should put a warm glow in every body's heart, very well done****kahpot
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2018
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Excellent and yes how family can fill that hole and mend those steps when we need a lift, and with Christmas coming should put a warm glow in every body's heart, very well done****kahpot
Comment Written 07-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2018
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Hello kahpot, Thanks so much for reading and glad you enjoyed. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about a house once alive and beautiful detoriorated over the years when there is no one having the time to do repairs but the house screams for attention and dreams to become new and alive again.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2018
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A very well-written poem about a house once alive and beautiful detoriorated over the years when there is no one having the time to do repairs but the house screams for attention and dreams to become new and alive again.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2018
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Hi Sandra, Many thanks for reading and glad you enjoyed. Blessings, K.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Aussie
Your poem is excellent and you did so good to make me feel the sadness and the feeling of emptiness of the home that once (I love this part)
Fire dancing in my heart
Christmas coming soon to be
Never sad I be, home so smart
Family lives as part of me.
Gert
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2018
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Hello Aussie
Your poem is excellent and you did so good to make me feel the sadness and the feeling of emptiness of the home that once (I love this part)
Fire dancing in my heart
Christmas coming soon to be
Never sad I be, home so smart
Family lives as part of me.
Gert
Comment Written 05-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2018
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Thanks so much Gert and glad you enjoyed the voice of the house that was me. Love, Kay.
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You are welcome Aussie
Gert
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
House you left to decay, staircase, windows even roof broken, now it is becoming haunted, fire dance at heart, come back home and make it sweet home again; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2018
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House you left to decay, staircase, windows even roof broken, now it is becoming haunted, fire dance at heart, come back home and make it sweet home again; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 05-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2018
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Hello friend, Haven't heard from you for a while. Thanks for reading my poem, glad you enjoyed. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from Gloria ....
What a fantastic idea K to use the metaphor of a house as a human. This house sounds very much like a terrific fixer upper.
The emotions you've painted in this fine poem are uplifting and spot on.
Super job friend K. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2018
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What a fantastic idea K to use the metaphor of a house as a human. This house sounds very much like a terrific fixer upper.
The emotions you've painted in this fine poem are uplifting and spot on.
Super job friend K. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 05-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2018
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Hello Gloria, I enjoyed being the voice of the falling-down house. Thanks for reading my friend. XXK.
Comment from country ranch writer
Really nice poem It is nice one can find happiness in fixing up old places and giving life to them. It isuch happiness for the old place to be filled with laughter.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018
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Really nice poem It is nice one can find happiness in fixing up old places and giving life to them. It isuch happiness for the old place to be filled with laughter.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018
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Hi Barbara, Hope all is well? Thanks for reading my friend. Yes, such happiness especially at Christmas.
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Yes I agree.
Comment from Cass Carlton
This is a real beauty, Aussie. A lonely house talking to itself and longing for people to come and live in it. The Artwork is lovely. Do you know the house? Or is it just a very good picture? The story ends happily with new people coming to live in the house, mending and painting and renewing. Children now live in the house and all the fun of Christmas is just around the corner. Well done my friend.This is poetry at its best cheers Cass
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018
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This is a real beauty, Aussie. A lonely house talking to itself and longing for people to come and live in it. The Artwork is lovely. Do you know the house? Or is it just a very good picture? The story ends happily with new people coming to live in the house, mending and painting and renewing. Children now live in the house and all the fun of Christmas is just around the corner. Well done my friend.This is poetry at its best cheers Cass
Comment Written 04-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018
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Hello Cass, Thanks so much for your happy review. No, the house is just a Bing photo of a falling-down house. love, Kay.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I'd love to have the money to do up and old house like the one in that picture. It looks as if it could be really homely. What a lovely poem, Kay, it is so different than the normal ones. Well done, I really enjoyed it. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018
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I'd love to have the money to do up and old house like the one in that picture. It looks as if it could be really homely. What a lovely poem, Kay, it is so different than the normal ones. Well done, I really enjoyed it. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 04-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018
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Hello my dear friend, I chose an old Queensland house as they are built to take the heat here. Thanks for reading precious. Love, Kay.
Comment from Sasha
This is a beautifully written poem about a sad and lonely house longing for a family to show it the love it once experienced. I enjoyed this very much and especially like that the home got its wish.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018
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This is a beautifully written poem about a sad and lonely house longing for a family to show it the love it once experienced. I enjoyed this very much and especially like that the home got its wish.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018
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Hello my friend, Thanks so much for reading and enjoying. Love, Kay.
