Bond's View
He has a pressing engagement...9 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This one-six-one, Bond's View, has the syllables in the right place and seems to suggest that wearing the sunglasses covers more than eyes, but intent as well.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2018
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This one-six-one, Bond's View, has the syllables in the right place and seems to suggest that wearing the sunglasses covers more than eyes, but intent as well.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2018
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Thanx for dropping by the ol' place, Bill -- always appreciate your input, sir!! :) ;) Yvette
Comment from Donka Kristeva
Hello Yvette, This is a great example of masterful use of very few words, as in other works of yours. An instant classic in my humble opinion. Very attractive altogether poetry presentation.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2018
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Hello Yvette, This is a great example of masterful use of very few words, as in other works of yours. An instant classic in my humble opinion. Very attractive altogether poetry presentation.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2018
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Thanx so much for stopping in, Donka -- so good to hear from you! :) ;) Glad you seemed to enjoy my little tribute to Bond. You know...I couldn't find a good picture of Connery -- he's actually the real 'Bond' to me! :) ;) Take care and have a wonderful week of intriguing adventures of your own!! :) ;) Yvette
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I'm gonna be paying more attention to the ones wearing glasses now. I've never thought about it but you do raise a good point that is verified in almost every movie you ever watch.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2018
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I'm gonna be paying more attention to the ones wearing glasses now. I've never thought about it but you do raise a good point that is verified in almost every movie you ever watch.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2018
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Thanx so much for stopping in, ma'am -- and glad that you seemed to enjoy my little tribute to Bond. You know...I couldn't find a good picture of Connery -- he's actually the real 'Bond' to me! :) ;) Take care and have a wonderful week of intriguing adventures of your own!! :) ;)
Comment from Lady Jane
Well, there...I like the image you chose to accent your 8 syllables, writer. I found no errors. Solid rhyme and excellent font/color choice. Content was 'cool' also. I wish you well in the contest with this piece. Nothing not to like.
Janelle
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018
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Well, there...I like the image you chose to accent your 8 syllables, writer. I found no errors. Solid rhyme and excellent font/color choice. Content was 'cool' also. I wish you well in the contest with this piece. Nothing not to like.
Janelle
Comment Written 03-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018
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Thanx so much for stopping in, Janelle -- and glad that you seemed to enjoy my little tribute to Bond. You know...I couldn't find a good picture of Connery -- he's actually the real 'Bond' to me! :) ;) Take care and have a wonderful week of intriguing adventures of your own!! :) ;)
Comment from Earl Corp
This is the best 1-6-1 contest entry i have read so far. You have my vote just for using Bond. Too bad you couldnf write a llonger poem. I wish you good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018
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This is the best 1-6-1 contest entry i have read so far. You have my vote just for using Bond. Too bad you couldnf write a llonger poem. I wish you good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018
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Thanx so much for stopping in, Earl -- and glad that you seemed to enjoy my little tribute to Bond. You know...I couldn't find a good picture of Connery -- he's actually the real 'Bond' to me! :) ;) Take care and have a wonderful week of intriguing adventures of your own!! :) ;)
Comment from Ricky1024
This '1-6-1- Ooem' was well written rich in Theme and Imagery
It read well and Flowed well with No Grammar Issues as well.
Adjective AND Objective Contents were both Excellent And Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with this
Doctor Ricky1024
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018
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This '1-6-1- Ooem' was well written rich in Theme and Imagery
It read well and Flowed well with No Grammar Issues as well.
Adjective AND Objective Contents were both Excellent And Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with this
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment Written 03-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018
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Thanx so much for stopping in, Doc -- and glad that you seemed to enjoy by little tribute to Bond. You know...I couldn't find a good picture of Connery -- he's actually the real 'Bond' to me! :) ;) Take care and have a wonderful week of intriguing adventures of your own!! :) ;)
Comment from Six-Star Writer
Story. FanStory. Written, not left stirring in our minds. Sorry, just trying to do the old Bond, James Bond thing in another way. Yeah, James Bond movies are cool. I guess spies always wear sunglasses so people can't read their intentions. A lot of poker players do this, too.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018
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Story. FanStory. Written, not left stirring in our minds. Sorry, just trying to do the old Bond, James Bond thing in another way. Yeah, James Bond movies are cool. I guess spies always wear sunglasses so people can't read their intentions. A lot of poker players do this, too.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018
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Thank you.
Comment from ciliverde
Oh my goodness, it's another one of these very short forms, and this one has the requirement for rhyme - not easy. You did well with this, I love the picture and your comment about the pressing engagement. I'd love to see the two second lines forming a complete sentence.
You could say 'wearing shades to disguise...spies.'
Great job! Good luck in the contest,
Carol
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018
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Oh my goodness, it's another one of these very short forms, and this one has the requirement for rhyme - not easy. You did well with this, I love the picture and your comment about the pressing engagement. I'd love to see the two second lines forming a complete sentence.
You could say 'wearing shades to disguise...spies.'
Great job! Good luck in the contest,
Carol
Comment Written 03-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018
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Thanx so much for stopping in, Carol -- and I took your advice on the single word change -- thanx, as always!! You know...I couldn't find a good picture of Connery -- he's actually the real 'Bond' to me! :) ;) Take care and have a wonderful week of intriguing adventures of your own!! :) ;)
Comment from Old Soldier
Good job with this, 1-6-1. These contest do work the brain. Good luck. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing, reading and reviewing...........................................................................................................................
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018
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Good job with this, 1-6-1. These contest do work the brain. Good luck. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing, reading and reviewing...........................................................................................................................
Comment Written 03-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018
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Thanx so much for stopping in, sir -- and glad that you seemed to enjoy by little tribute to Bond. You know...I couldn't find a good picture of Connery -- he's actually the real 'Bond' to me! :) ;) Take care and have a wonderful week of intriguing adventures of your own!! :) ;)
