Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

"This Self Appreciation Piece' comes with many messages.
From her Surroundings and many Friends to all the Delicacies that God In The Great Sea...
Shath to offer.
Yes, she is Beautifully as Beautiful as a Mermaid should be....
"But more...
Well written and perceived Elaine.
Ricky1024

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018

Thanks, my friend. Elaine

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi mermaids. True to your name, a mermaid poem! Delightful. Have not seen you in awhile. I hope everything is OK.
We all should be grateful for what we have this Thanksgiving. Good message. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018

I appreciate your taking time to read and enjoy. I have a busy life and occasionally am unable to be online. Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

This is a pleasure to read. Your writing is smooth and the language is colorful. Very positive and even joyous poem. a 'feel good' work. great, Elaine...............meeshu

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018

I appreciate your encouraging review. Thanks so much. Elaine

Comment from Mitchell Brontė

Excellent

I really enjoyed this very clever take on thanksgiving from a Mermaids perspective.
Such a wonderful format and effortless flow to your words, fantastic creativity.
Mitchell

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2018

Thanks for reading about the lady of the sea. I appreciate your positive comments. Elaine

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

Thinking about God's Grace and gifts of the Infinite Creations, now mermaid feels the need of thanksgiving to all she finds around and God above; well said, well done. Write More Inspire More -- DR ALCREATOR

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 Comment Written 03-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2018

Thanks for your thoughtful comments and positive review. Elaine

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

This a lovely and well written poem about a mermaid expressing her thanks for everything the sea has given her. Very nice work with this, I enjoyed it very much.

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 Comment Written 03-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2018

I am honored by your review. Thanks so much for taking time to read. Elaine