Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Excellent you make the mermaids life sound so serene, while relating to our lives as we must be thankful for what we were given and have taken from this wonderful thing called life, very well written****kahpot

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018

I appreciate your thoughtful comments. Thanks so much. Elaine

Comment from Dy-Dy

Excellent

It had an air of the whimsical about it and that's a pretty good mark to hit when your aim is to write Fantasy poems, isn't it? I enjoyed the fluidity of your words and the imagery you evoked. Punctuation is all I have to recommend to you. Good job, mermaids!

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from Anntonette

Excellent

Love the color of the background you chose, it reflects the sea. Great sense of imagery here! Love the simile as well! Thanks for sharing!
- Anntonette J

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from SLMorrical

Excellent

I love this. It's wonderfully written. This was easy to follow. The poem flows real well. I just love Mermaids and I can picture the Mermaids swimming in the ocean. I can hear her singing. Well done. Keep writing.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

Comment from Aussie

Excellent

Well, this is a different kind of Thanksgiving. For a moment I thought it was your normal celebration. I liked the theme and had never given thought of a mermaid thanking her Father for all she had. Well done.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018

Thanks for taking time to read about the mermaid giving thanks. Elaine

Comment from Mark Schardine

Excellent

The beauty and vastness of the sea cause us to feel humility and admiration. He has given us a truly astonishing world, one we must cherish.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018

Yes, the sea must be cherished. Thanks for your encouraging review. Elaine

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

Beautiful picture of the sea and all it stands for and much happiness below for all to enjoy and say thanks for. I love the ocean and all it has to offer for it is fantastic.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018

Thanks for a great review. Elaine

reply by country ranch writer on 14-Nov-2018

Smiles

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

To each her own. I'm glad the mermaid is enjoying her life. Your words remind us that we do have much to be thankful for, no matter where we are in life. Great description of the things the mermaid has to be thankful for. Lovely references to the dolphins and sea dragons. Lovely artwork. You remind us how close we are to that time of year! judi

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018

Thanks for a positive review about the mermaid giving thanks. Elaine

reply by judiverse on 14-Nov-2018

You're very welcome. judi

Comment from Teri7

Exceptional

This is a very beautiful and colorful poem you have penned about the mermaids Thanksgiving. You used very good descriptive words as she told what she is thankful for. Very lovely art work to go with your words. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018

Thanks again for your generous amount of stars and encouraging review. Elaine

Comment from tbacha58

Excellent

it is that time
when thanks
should come forth
from this mermaid
for all she has

HI, You are giving such a beautiful example and positiveness to us the writers. How we can accept any downfalls, how we can enjoy the smell of the air, watch the rain fall and be happy. I really enjoyed reading this poem. Love Terry xoxo

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2018

Love your positive words, thanks so much for taking time to read about the mermaid. Elaine