Should Our Two Paths Cross
For Hope of Reconciliation34 total reviews
Comment from Lady Jane
What a powerful penning, Diane. The vision behind the words, that of two becoming unfettered with past feelings, the release of regret and doubt, what a freeing place to venture to. I cannot find anything to suggest for correction. Your words are smooth, carefree, and poignant. I am in awe!
This is a solid six in my book. The font, the message, the color, the image, and the premise all cohesively form an amazing sonnet full of meaningful, valuable verbiage! Tell hubs to eat a piece of cake for me. I know his dinner will be yummy, too, so he can share :)
Janelle
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
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What a powerful penning, Diane. The vision behind the words, that of two becoming unfettered with past feelings, the release of regret and doubt, what a freeing place to venture to. I cannot find anything to suggest for correction. Your words are smooth, carefree, and poignant. I am in awe!
This is a solid six in my book. The font, the message, the color, the image, and the premise all cohesively form an amazing sonnet full of meaningful, valuable verbiage! Tell hubs to eat a piece of cake for me. I know his dinner will be yummy, too, so he can share :)
Janelle
Comment Written 20-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2019
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Bless your heat, Janelle!
What a positively lovely review!
Thank you ever so much for your exceptional rating as well! Probably the 2nd or 3rd sonnet I have ever penned. But I was determined to write one!
Hubs just devoured two helpings of pot roast! He was so happy! I love to cook meals like that!
Now... you and yours celebrate as well! LIFE IS GOOD!
Thank you so much!
diane
Comment from Bill Schott
This sonnet, Should Our Two Paths Cross, has the proper formatting and projects a time and place where two severed hearts may find that they are ready to be fused again.
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This sonnet, Should Our Two Paths Cross, has the proper formatting and projects a time and place where two severed hearts may find that they are ready to be fused again.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2019
Comment from jaybird1
A great, true in every form sonnet.I loved the bittersweet nostalgia.Thank you for the large
readable print size.It was a great help for my 93 year old failing eyes.Enjoyable and worthy
of a six-Jaybird
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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A great, true in every form sonnet.I loved the bittersweet nostalgia.Thank you for the large
readable print size.It was a great help for my 93 year old failing eyes.Enjoyable and worthy
of a six-Jaybird
Comment Written 15-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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Hello jaybird!
I am honored by your exceptional rating and complimentary review.
So very pleased my sentiments and typing size resonated with you!
Do stop by again!
diane
Comment from The Cowboy Poet
Very nicely done. The form is good and the meter well handled. I read lots of sonnets and even attempted a few myself with varying degrees of success. I like this one. I thought the couplet summing up your theme was especially well done.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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Very nicely done. The form is good and the meter well handled. I read lots of sonnets and even attempted a few myself with varying degrees of success. I like this one. I thought the couplet summing up your theme was especially well done.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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Hello Friend!
Thank you!
So pleased you enjoyed!
diane
Comment from Carola Fernandez
Very nice and sweet poem with successful rhyming. Like the first two lines - great opening that prepares you for the rest. Great clonsing as well with the "mended heart" . Lovely picture. Best of luck!
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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Very nice and sweet poem with successful rhyming. Like the first two lines - great opening that prepares you for the rest. Great clonsing as well with the "mended heart" . Lovely picture. Best of luck!
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2019
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Hello Carola!
So pleased you enjoyed.
Thank you!
diane
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I love the beautiful message conveyed here. I have family members that are at odds with each other and are in need of reconciliation. You've expressed this message with beautifully descriptive words that rhyme and flow effortlessly. Thanks for sharing this well written poem and its powerful message. Well done.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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I love the beautiful message conveyed here. I have family members that are at odds with each other and are in need of reconciliation. You've expressed this message with beautifully descriptive words that rhyme and flow effortlessly. Thanks for sharing this well written poem and its powerful message. Well done.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Hello Jeffrey!
So pleased you enjoyed and my words resonated with you.
Thank you for your excellent rating and empathetic review.
diane
Comment from Ulla
Hi Diane, what a wonderful and meaningful sonnet you've written here. It's poignant and show so much love to another being, Very touching. I hope it will do well in the contest. Warm regards. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Hi Diane, what a wonderful and meaningful sonnet you've written here. It's poignant and show so much love to another being, Very touching. I hope it will do well in the contest. Warm regards. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Hello Ulla!
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you for your excellent rating and positive review!
diane
Comment from susand3022
Hello Mrs. KT, It seems my life will never together time impart... I fear I will end up with yet another broken heart. However, hope springs eternal, so I keep the faith!
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Hello Mrs. KT, It seems my life will never together time impart... I fear I will end up with yet another broken heart. However, hope springs eternal, so I keep the faith!
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
Comment from June Sargent
What a touching and poignant sonnet. Through the ups and downs, hills and valleys of life, hope does spring eternal. And this poem ends with a note of hope for reconciliation with the help of faith and mercy. Well done. A pleasure to read.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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What a touching and poignant sonnet. Through the ups and downs, hills and valleys of life, hope does spring eternal. And this poem ends with a note of hope for reconciliation with the help of faith and mercy. Well done. A pleasure to read.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Hello June!
So pleased you enjoyed!
Whew! What a challenge to pen!
Thank you for your excellent rating and thoughtful review!
diane
Comment from TPAC
Sweet. I like the flow in this write read, finding line structuring excellent in its given presentation, quenching thought refreshing to my minds interests. Strong positive statements appealing in views. All in my opinion of this write.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Sweet. I like the flow in this write read, finding line structuring excellent in its given presentation, quenching thought refreshing to my minds interests. Strong positive statements appealing in views. All in my opinion of this write.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Hello TPAC!
So pleased you enjoyed and my words resonated with you!
I thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review!
diane
