Comment from Jaye Bennett

Excellent

Now isn't this special. I like it. Superman at the door and in your face. On top of that he "fussed you good." You had your thoughts in order and the sequence laid out well. Superman was right. Words do have power. With your poem, you show just how much power they have. Good job.

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2018

Thanks for reading and reviewing. I am glad you agree with Superman.

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Comment from meeshu

Excellent

This is a very good piece, consistent rhymes with great
rhythm and flow. The message is vague yet compelling. an interesting write, Joan...........................meeshu

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2018

I am glad you thought it flowed well. Thank you very much for reading;
Joan

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

What an excellent story, definitely powers of a difference but power all the same, as words can and have changed and influenced many, this is very well done****kqahpot

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2018

I appreciate your kind comments and high rating

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Comment from Zue65

Excellent

I like the story infused in this poem about a super hero visiting the author. The message about the power of writers to change things and inspire others is refreshing. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018

Glad you liked the poem and its message. Thanks for the kind words and generous rating.


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Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written poem about the super hero come to visit you at home. When someone come to visit unexpectedly we always wonder what they may want from us.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018

Thanks for reading and reviewing. Glad you enjoyed it.

Joan

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Words have great power we know that and these extra powers yearned for here in this poem will sadly make no difference to our lives. Happiness is something we exude from within, but maybe I am being a little too serious here and the thought of a super hero entering our home would be a lot of fun, especially for the kids! A lighthearted and fun write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018

Thanks for the review and comments. I appreciate all the stars.

Joan

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Even though this is fantastical, I think you are supporting a good point with this creative tale. Words do have power and can change things. Have a great day. I really enjoyed this.

Melissa

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2018

Thanks for you kind words and support, Melissa.

Joan

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

Good to see so many exercising their superpowers on FanStory! Being articulate carries responsibilities with it. There are many who don't have the power of words who need someone else to speak up for them.

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2018

Thanks for the review and high rating. You are right about speaking for others who can't for some reason
or another. Enjoy your weekend,

Joan

Comment from Lady Jane

Excellent

"Who is it this time ", I think. - edit suggestion

"Who is it this time?" I think.

The window(,) I just can - needs comma

He seems patient(,) but angry. -needs comma

I, nervously, welcome him in - remove commas in this one

Just so I'm sure he flashes his "S". - period inside the quotation marks :)

You're not using your super power(,) I fear." - comma needed

"So(,) you can't fly and don't have X-ray eyes(,)- commas needed

Whether (it's) poetry or prose - I think it reads smoother with 'it's' instead of it. What do you think?

To bring people's lives a new lease(,) - comma needed

So(,) if you want no more visits from me

Haha, now this is a cute poem, dear. I love that Superman arrives just in the nick of time to shed light on the waning muse :) Yes, words can be very powerful tools. Nicely written. I made some suggestions, punctuation edits, and wish you all the best with writing and living up to your 'super power." You've got skills.
Janelle

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2018

Thanks for the review. Wow, I didn't know I had such a problem with commas.

Joan

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written poem you have penned about the super hero visiting your house. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery from the words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2018

Thanks for the positive and encouraging review.


Joan