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crystalline

a 3 5 3 poem

5 total reviews 
Comment from rama devi
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Interesting. I love how this leaves many avenues of interpretation open to the reader. the last word is like an AHA...surreal, even! The word choices of wandering, crystalline (which is a polar opposite to wandering, in some respects) and testify all pack a ton of meaning and can be interpreted in multifaceted manners. Well done!

Love,
rd

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2018
    Thanks for your encouraging and generous review. I am enjoying the change of seasons after so long in tropical climes. Wish you a lucky day dear. j
reply by rama devi on 06-Nov-2018
    Same to you!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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In course of travelling or wandering, clear or crystal foot prints can prove the truth of marks left; well said, well done. Write More Inspire More -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018
    Thanks for the review. Cheers, j
Comment from Six-Star Writer
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I like this, since in only a few words, you brought forth a mystery. Whose footprints? A creatures? Earthly? Or otherwise? Is whatever left the footprints benevolent, or malevolent.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018
    It is just peaceful me walking through the forest. Thanks for your review, cheers, j
Comment from Debbie Pope
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What a beautiful poem and photo. It's a fine entry for the contest. My only suggestion has to do with spelling, and I actually don't care about such things. Some voters do though. I think footprints is one word.
That's my only suggestion. Otherwise, it is perfect.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018
    Thanks for review and advice. I enjoy my daily walk and observing the simple things. Cheers, j
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-I like how you wrote with
one continuous thought, and
a good descriptive word at the beginning.
-I also like the 'crystalline' image,
and the concluding line, as well.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018
    Thanks for the insightful review."
    Cheers, j
reply by Pam (respa) on 04-Nov-2018
    You are very welcome, J.