Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

If this is a photograph of you at that ungodly hour I wouldn't dare even to clear my throat in your presence at that time.

Perhaps a word to the wise might improve your mood.

Less conviviality at night
Might serve to set the morning right.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018

Great review, thanks

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

All that is missing here is my photo with a cup of morning joe in hand! Thank you for this, it is a scream! I was not expecting somethimg so darn funny! Thanks, I needed a good laugh! A winner for the contest!
All my best,
Sally

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018

Thank you so much, glad you like it.

Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

Wow...

Perfect poem to match up with the photo...

To everyone near me, this is a warning
I don't do conversation first thing in the morning!

Good luck in the contest... John

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 Comment Written 30-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018

Thanks John. Glad you like it