Comment from Nanny 6

Excellent

Good job on this contest with the comparison between the cat and mouse and their animosity towards each other. Congratulations on your win! A well deserved win for sure
: )
Judy

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2018

Thank you so much for your kind words and for reading my poem.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written cat and mouse story that is as old as cat and mouse in one house. The mouse will be weary of the cat that are able to catch the little irritation that invades his private space with one pounce.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2018

Thank you for reading my poem and for the nice review.

Comment from jenintorre

Excellent

Firstly congratulations on winning the competition. This poem is so worthy. Evrything it says is so true. Very well written with excellent rhyme. I am a cat lover but not so sure after reading that. Cheers Jen.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2018

Thanks so much, you are very kind. My family loves cats, although I will say that I'm not thrilled when it drops a mouse at my feet. It's in their nature I guess. Thanks again. :)

Comment from Donka Kristeva

Excellent

Really funny and fun. The "speeches" of the two animals fit ingeniously into their characters and behaviour. They are very descriptive, and as a special gift-- well rhymed.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018

Thank you for such a nice review.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Absolutely love this -- you've managed through an entirely 'dialogue' write to create personality (that we mostly expect, but your word choices are wonderful!) and facial expression images in the mind of the reader! :) :) There is nothing else to say but GREAT JOB! :) :) Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest! :)

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018

Thanks for such a wonderful review! It's always nice to hear from you. :)

Comment from oorwull

Excellent

Thought I'd read most of the cat vs. mouse conflicts, but this one is really good.
Covers the bases from both points of view .. great idea! Felt a little downcast in the end, as I really wasn't looking for a winner!
Good presentation!

Willie

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018

Thank you for reading and reviewing. It's up in the air who the winner is, lol.

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

I thoroughly enjoyed this. It is almost true. I say almost because cats like to play with prey before going in for the kill and some actually do manage to escape and worse, breed inside the house. They wouldn't come in on their own. The poxy cat brings them in in the first place.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018

Thank you for your nice review. :)

Comment from Carolyn Reaves

Excellent

I loved it! Cute writing about the qualities of each animal. I like how you used very descriptive words to tell us more about the animals. I also like the pictures you used. That added a lot.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018

Thank you so much, I really appreciate you reading and reviewing my poem. :)