Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

OMG!! I've seen a film about these killer ants, they can eat anything in their path as fast at the speed of light!! What a horrible way to go!! This was surely a brilliant contest entry which, again, you should have won! You have a busy mind, my friend!! :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 31-May-2022

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reply by the author on 31-May-2022

I think Dean Kuch was still competing then, so?

Comment from Spitfire

Exceptional

OMG. Staked on top of a killer ant hill
Great simile:like a masked man with a chainsaw in a china cabinet.
The details made me cringe, especially the part about the eyes. Excellent write, Bill. I'm off to vote.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2018

Thank you, Shari. I knew it would have to be cringeworthy to compete in Horror.

Comment from prettybluebirds

Exceptional

Wow, this story certainly deserves six stars. It is absolutely fantastic. You put the reader into the victim's body and take us along for the ride. It should be a winner in the contest. I wish you the very best in the competition.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018

Thanks, PBB, for the vote of confidence.

Comment from Anntonette

Excellent

I like how this is descriptive! You could make this out as a book if you wanted to. The narrator is very distressed, which is interesting! Keep writing!
Good luck!
- Anntonette J

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018

Thanks, Anntonette

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

I enjoyed reading this work a great deal. The imagery and wonderfully descriptive language is outstanding. you had me ready for a happy poem about childbirth, I think you did that on purpose, very clever..

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018

Thanks, meeshu. You fell into my trap.

reply by meeshu on 29-Oct-2018

you are devious.