Puncturing Reality
Viewing comments for Chapter 37 "The Welcoming and Welcoming II"My thoughts on this "Ago Old Subject."
5 total reviews
Comment from Mistydawn
What a very interesting story/poem. It's a very intriguing plot start to finish. Had me on the edge of my seat the entire time. When the woodsman killed the witch I thought it was over, but like all good horrors the plot continues on with a new generation, new blood. ( Halloween started 40 years ago and is still going.) I look forward to reading more.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018
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What a very interesting story/poem. It's a very intriguing plot start to finish. Had me on the edge of my seat the entire time. When the woodsman killed the witch I thought it was over, but like all good horrors the plot continues on with a new generation, new blood. ( Halloween started 40 years ago and is still going.) I look forward to reading more.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018
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Glad you enjoyed my little Halloween Horror.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Sherechita
This is a lovely, as well as a bit spooky and creepy story. I love the punctuation placement. Very strategic and helpful in the telling of the story. Well done!
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018
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This is a lovely, as well as a bit spooky and creepy story. I love the punctuation placement. Very strategic and helpful in the telling of the story. Well done!
Comment Written 29-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018
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Glad you enjoyed my little Halloween Horror.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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It is wonderful, thank you!
Comment from Susan Strecker
This piece was very hard to follow. The plot jumped around and there was no arc. There were so many copyediting, grammar and punctuation mistakes that it took me out of the story. Common nouns were capitalized, numbers were not spelled out and punctuation was misused. It might seem petty to mention something that technically doesn't have to do with the plot, but a writer never wants to do anything that prevents the reader from becoming totally immersed in the story. Presenting a clean piece of writing sets the tone for a good reading experience.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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This piece was very hard to follow. The plot jumped around and there was no arc. There were so many copyediting, grammar and punctuation mistakes that it took me out of the story. Common nouns were capitalized, numbers were not spelled out and punctuation was misused. It might seem petty to mention something that technically doesn't have to do with the plot, but a writer never wants to do anything that prevents the reader from becoming totally immersed in the story. Presenting a clean piece of writing sets the tone for a good reading experience.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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Well touerth style tis youreth while my stories is increxi ble.
Glad you loved it!
Which to me means...
It was 'Spoctologically, Spoctological, Logically, Logical!'
Which means my story was quite Enterprising you Trekkie!
Want a date?
Been me up!
Comment from prettybluebirds
Hi, Ricky. I haven't seen any of your work for quite some time. It's good to see that your pen still writes as good as ever. this story held my attention from start to finish. I found it interesting and like any good book it is hard to lay down. Hope to hear more from you soon.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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Hi, Ricky. I haven't seen any of your work for quite some time. It's good to see that your pen still writes as good as ever. this story held my attention from start to finish. I found it interesting and like any good book it is hard to lay down. Hope to hear more from you soon.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
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Thanks again and glad to hear from you.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment from Lisa Heath
The writer of this review seems to think this is the beginning of a good novel. It appears to be both scary and religiously witnessing. Good Luck! Lisa Heath
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2018
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The writer of this review seems to think this is the beginning of a good novel. It appears to be both scary and religiously witnessing. Good Luck! Lisa Heath
Comment Written 26-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2018
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Thanks.
Dr.Ricky
