Comment from poesyapprentice

Excellent

The sound didn't play for me and if it didn't work for others it might have cost you in the vote, but the rotating pic is nice. (lol, I don't know how to do any of that). The red words making their own sentence/statement was clever, however, I think the poem would have worked better with a couple of minor changes like some punctuation after costume and maybe the word come instead of then. It's a good entry though : )

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018

Thanks, as they say ?busy going nowhere? I appreciate your feedback,sound is a major ?not working? thing.
Hugs, Trisha

reply by poesyapprentice on 04-Nov-2018

Hopefully the sound worked for others. Come to think of it, I didn't hear sound on anyone's in the contest even though my volume was up, if they used sound, that is, lol. Could have just been my computer. Looking forward to seeing more from you : )

Comment from krys123

Excellent

Cheers, Bucketlist'
>Brilliant Slideshow and one that I never would've thought of but very inventively creative and ingeniously clever.
.> Good luck in the contest and take care and have a good one my dear friend..
Alx

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018

Thanks for your complimentary review , Krysyna. I owe any progress to your classes.
Hugs, Trisha

reply by krys123 on 05-Nov-2018

You're very welcome Trisha.
Alx

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

You did a good job with your 575, Mystery Author. Good job with the syllable count, the font colors, and the interesting pictures. I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes. Jan

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2018

Thanks for your positive review, Jan
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

A nice little message within your 5-7-5, "it's your treat." Halloween is becoming more popular than ever. My grown kids love it. Nicely expressed here and illustrated with the changing illustration. Much luck in the contest. Marilyn

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2018

I appreciated your review, Marilyn
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

When the environment is favourable, you can at ease become a Dr. Frankenstein, just costume accordingly, and apply your intelligence and then trick or treat with the skeleton; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018

Thanks, as always Al.
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Lady Jane

Excellent

Hmmmm, me thinks me knows who the mysterious writer may be. Love the invitation, but until the contest is over, we cannot decide if we are truly brave enough to 'trick or treat' with you, or is it ME? Hehe. Excellent presentation with great colors and simplistic formatting (minus that fabulous GIF)...the GIF, is a piece of artwork all on it's own. Syllable count is perfection. Good luck in the contest
Janelle

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018

Yes, it?s me, thanks for the positive review
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from artisart4u

Exceptional

This is a nice Halloween haiku.
You have the correct amount of syllables.
The words in red tells the story.
Your pictures of Halloween are nice.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018

Thanks so much for your six stars and great review
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

Good job with the poem, word count is spot on and fitting. Bad choice of image though I think. I'm off for a headache tablet...

All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018

Thank you

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

This is a pleasure to read. Your writing is smooth and the language is VERY colorful. Very well penned, Dr. F. good luck in contest..

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018

Thanks very much
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Oh my goodness -- that's a lot for old eyes to take in all at once!! :) ;) A fun, blinking neon sign to highlight your 'very original' costume party invitation -- love it!! :) :) Thank you so very much for sharing and good luck in the contest! :)

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018

I slowed it down , I agree it was too fast. i appreciated your positive review.
Hugs, Trisha