Weddings Off
Sam fixes the cat hater39 total reviews
Comment from tfawcus
Sometimes it takes extreme action to ward off disaster. Clearly your cat was brought up in the school of hard knocks. He sure knows where to land the killer blow. Thank goodness that he still has eight lives left.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2018
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Sometimes it takes extreme action to ward off disaster. Clearly your cat was brought up in the school of hard knocks. He sure knows where to land the killer blow. Thank goodness that he still has eight lives left.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2018
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Thank you. Cats do know when someone dislikes them. Of course, I have never seen a cat take such extreme measures, though. LOL
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
=^..^= Meowzer and purr on for cat those of us who understand and love cats. I enjoyed your story. Animal haters are NOT to be trusted. I love the moral of your little story. A great contest entry!
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=^..^= Meowzer and purr on for cat those of us who understand and love cats. I enjoyed your story. Animal haters are NOT to be trusted. I love the moral of your little story. A great contest entry!
Comment Written 27-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2018
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Thanks. Yep, cats most definitely know a cat hater when they see one.
Comment from Bill Schott
This one-hundred-fifty-word story, Wedding's Off, captures all the tension, terror, and trickiness that we associate with those loved or hated fur balls. Neat.
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This one-hundred-fifty-word story, Wedding's Off, captures all the tension, terror, and trickiness that we associate with those loved or hated fur balls. Neat.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2018
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Thank you. I, for one, love those fur balls. They are a unique and delightful creature.
Comment from LIJ Red
The fondness for animals that was a part of my late wife was a small but very definite factor in the forming of our 45-year romance...she preferred dogs by a factor of about 1.0000000001 to 1. Excellent response to that prompt.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2018
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The fondness for animals that was a part of my late wife was a small but very definite factor in the forming of our 45-year romance...she preferred dogs by a factor of about 1.0000000001 to 1. Excellent response to that prompt.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2018
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Thank you. I'm one of those much revered CRAZY CAT LADIES and proud of it.
Comment from Tia Attwood
Hi
This is an excellent written story, I think you had accomplished your mission as well with fulfilling the prompt requirements and i thought it was fantastic.
Good luck in the contest. Very strong entrty
Regards
Tia
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2018
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Hi
This is an excellent written story, I think you had accomplished your mission as well with fulfilling the prompt requirements and i thought it was fantastic.
Good luck in the contest. Very strong entrty
Regards
Tia
Comment Written 27-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2018
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Thank you. I'm a confirmed cat lover and love to write about the little fur balls.
Comment from jenintorre
That'Il learn 'I'm eh? I love this flash fiction. I think you have written a winner here. Great ending. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2018
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That'Il learn 'I'm eh? I love this flash fiction. I think you have written a winner here. Great ending. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2018
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Thank you. Cats know a cat hater when they see one.
Comment from Spitfire
Dynamic verb in this as I followed Sam's violent reaction to the groom.
his paws scrabbling for purchase on the hardwood floor. --I've watched my cat do that. It's hilarious.
kicked him across the room where Sam hit the wall then lay stunned on the floor.
Yeap. Seen that happen too-- the cat a victim of hubby's anger about something I said. Poor cat suffered a broken leg. I never forgave Frank for that.
Fortunately, he does love cats. I would feel the same way as the bride.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2018
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Dynamic verb in this as I followed Sam's violent reaction to the groom.
his paws scrabbling for purchase on the hardwood floor. --I've watched my cat do that. It's hilarious.
kicked him across the room where Sam hit the wall then lay stunned on the floor.
Yeap. Seen that happen too-- the cat a victim of hubby's anger about something I said. Poor cat suffered a broken leg. I never forgave Frank for that.
Fortunately, he does love cats. I would feel the same way as the bride.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2018
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Thank you. I hear you. If someone harmed one of my cats there would be hell to pay. I love my furballs.
Comment from Dawn Munro
First, my main comment -- YAY! I loved this, especially the 'catty' (lol) ending. *grin*
Now a nitpick:
"...funny(,) long clothes." Always a comma between adjectives (although these days I am seeing the punctuation and grammar rules I grew up with being ignored more and more often, even by some of the 'greats'. *sigh* They CAN get away with it though -- new authors cannot.)
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2018
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First, my main comment -- YAY! I loved this, especially the 'catty' (lol) ending. *grin*
Now a nitpick:
"...funny(,) long clothes." Always a comma between adjectives (although these days I am seeing the punctuation and grammar rules I grew up with being ignored more and more often, even by some of the 'greats'. *sigh* They CAN get away with it though -- new authors cannot.)
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2018
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Thank you, and thanks for the tip. You know, I forgot that bit of grammar when I wrote this, I did know better. My bad.
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You're very welcome.
Comment from BeasPeas
I'll take the cat, too. Great job. Good descriptions and I like the gorgeous image of the kitty. Good luck in the contest with this worthy entry. Marilyn
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2018
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I'll take the cat, too. Great job. Good descriptions and I like the gorgeous image of the kitty. Good luck in the contest with this worthy entry. Marilyn
Comment Written 26-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2018
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Thank you. Cats can spot a cat hater a mile away. I love the furballs no matter what they do.
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Me too. I love kitties and have always had at least one.
Comment from country ranch writer
NICE WORK UP FOR THIS STORY THE KITTY GOT HIS REVENGE BIG TIME ON THE CAT KICKER AND SHE GOT TO SEE THE CAT HATTER FOR WHAT HE WAS AN ASS.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2018
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NICE WORK UP FOR THIS STORY THE KITTY GOT HIS REVENGE BIG TIME ON THE CAT KICKER AND SHE GOT TO SEE THE CAT HATTER FOR WHAT HE WAS AN ASS.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2018
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Thank you. Yeah, I'm glad she found out before it was too late. LOL
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