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Weddings Off

Sam fixes the cat hater

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Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Brilliant! Fine work in a flash--this may well be a winner. Hilarious tale with a wickedly clever twist! My cat would get revenge by climbing on the laps of people who hated cats.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
    Thank you for your comments. I wrote this story over two years ago. I don't think it won the contest but I had fun writing it. I do love my cats.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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He he he, I always thought cats were clever and your write here proved it! Cats are the masters, they rule their kingdom and no one gets in their way, just loved it! Love Dolly x

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018
    Thank you. Cats do know a cat hater when they see one. They also know who like them. A man in an expensive suit came to our house. My Himalayan cat, Elroy, looked the guy over then jumped onto his lap. I was horrified his suit would be ruined. The guy just laughed and said he was a cat lover and cats landed on him where ever he went.
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
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Oh my. I guess the cat is much smarter than his mistress as he knew his secret. I guess it 's best it came out before the wedding. Well done. I hope you do well in the contest. Rox

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018
    Thank you. A cat knows a cat hater when he sees one. LOL
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the Wedding an a Cat? Flash Fiction.
You have told a complete story.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018
    Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I appreciate your input.
Comment from fm wright
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Well you nailed it. The perfect combination of a wedding and a cat. You had me worried about the cat. I consider myself an animal lover. I used to have a kennel but now my companions are felines. Anyway a good story and wonderful entry for the contest. Best of wishes with this piece.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018
    Thank you. I someone hurt one of my cats their life would be in jeopardy. LOL
Comment from Carolyn Reaves
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Clever use of both the cat and wedding together as the prompt advised to do. I laughed because my dad had a cat that acted like Sam. His cat was named Jasper.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018
    Thank you. Yep, cats know a ct hater when they see one. LOL
Comment from Realist101
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Excellent prompt post! LoL! I love this and especially from the cat's point of view. I was told we shouldn't write like this but I love it.

Very good and best in your contest Bluebird! :)

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
    Thank you. Why are not supposed to write like this? I'm curious about what you mean.
reply by Realist101 on 28-Oct-2018
    Oh, from an animals' point of view! Lol! It was a comment made by another FS friend, who says we can't possible know what an animal thinks! I disagree. But who knows, he may have been right. But I enjoy trying and have a few stories from animals POV too. Nice work in my opinion PBB. :)
Comment from sandragee
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Sam is determined to stop the marriage between his mistress and her cat-hating fiancée. He sends food flying from the table, and knocks over the wedding cake. When he is kicked across the room by the cat-hater, Sam considers the pain worth it when he hears his owner says, "I will not marry someone who doesn't like cats."
Nice job of incorporating a wedding and cat in your story.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
    Thank you, so glad you liked the silly story.
Comment from KatyM
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Good kitty! hehe I have two cats and a dog. I think I am more of a cat person. I grew up with dogs. Right now we have 4 kittens too. I can't imagine not loving animals. The exception for me would be reptiles. I don't hate them but they are not my favorite. Great job.
First time I have read any of your writing.
katy

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2018
    Thank you. I'm not too fond of snakes myself. I do love my cats and my dog.
Comment from Ulla
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Uhhh. I love this little story about the cat hater. A great flash story, and funny as well. One wrong move and the wedding is off. Well done to the cat. Now, I'm a cat lover and I've always had cats, so I can totally sympathise. Good luck in the contest. All the best. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 27-Oct-2018
    Thank you. Yeah, I love cats and they know a cat hater when they see one.