Catzilla
Some things do not mix.21 total reviews
Comment from victor 66
I'm not a big cat fan, but I can well understand the main character's reaction to this unforgettable if not unforgivable act. May Catzilla rest in peace. Humor, irony and believability in 150 words, well done and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018
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I'm not a big cat fan, but I can well understand the main character's reaction to this unforgettable if not unforgivable act. May Catzilla rest in peace. Humor, irony and believability in 150 words, well done and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018
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Thank you so much for the excellent review! Yes, Catzilla is resting in peace all right! Too bad he missed the wedding. I had fun with this piece. Thanks for laughing along with me!
All my best,
Sally
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You are most welcome, Sally.
Comment from LaRosa
Oh, my gosh, how butterfly giggle funny this is! I hope you do well in the flash fiction prompt. The tell of the story had suspense. The poem was a perfect twist ending.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018
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Oh, my gosh, how butterfly giggle funny this is! I hope you do well in the flash fiction prompt. The tell of the story had suspense. The poem was a perfect twist ending.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018
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Thank you LaRosa for the super review. I am honored, however, at Catzill?s expense. Maybe I?ll do a sequel: ?Son of Catzilla, Part 2.?
Thanks for laughing with me!
All my best,
Sally
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Oh, do it do it do it!
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Okay, okay, okay!!!
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
Nice job with this one, and thankfully a bit of originality (all the others I've read have basically been the same story).
I hate cats so I found this very satisfying...
good luck to you
GMG
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018
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Hi there,
Nice job with this one, and thankfully a bit of originality (all the others I've read have basically been the same story).
I hate cats so I found this very satisfying...
good luck to you
GMG
Comment Written 25-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018
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Thank you for the excellent review and comments. My husband hates cats and thought this was hysterical! FanStory has plenty of cat lovers and I am sure many have been offended. Oh well.
All my best to you and yours,
Sally
Comment from frogbook
Enjoyable and original story here in these few words and ending with a rhyming tombstone. This story has it all. I hope you put a warning for cat violence so u don't upset anyone-haha.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018
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Enjoyable and original story here in these few words and ending with a rhyming tombstone. This story has it all. I hope you put a warning for cat violence so u don't upset anyone-haha.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018
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Thank you for the excellent review! Yes, a cat lover already spoke up, however, gave me a great review. She did not feel sorry for me at all! Can you imagine? I reminded her it was fictional. I?m sure that give her some peace. I had fun with this one and I am so glad to share it with you!
All my best,
Sally
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hey, at the cost of wedding dresses today and as much as I love animals, I can't say as I blame you for killing the cat.
Good 150 word flash fiction tail...a-h-h-h, e-r-r-r, heh-heh... I meant tale, of course.
Best of luck in the contest.
~Dean
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018
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Hey, at the cost of wedding dresses today and as much as I love animals, I can't say as I blame you for killing the cat.
Good 150 word flash fiction tail...a-h-h-h, e-r-r-r, heh-heh... I meant tale, of course.
Best of luck in the contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 25-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018
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Thank you Dean for the excellent review. I?ve been married 43 years and paid $50 for my wedding gown and veil. I am glad you enjoyed my tail of made up woes. I had fun dreaming up Catzilla. Maybe he will have a return visit someday, possibly ?Son of Catzilla, Part 2.? We?ll see. We need more laughter here at FanStory! I?m glad you could join in!
All my best,
Sally
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I'm glad I could join in too, Sally.
You are more than welcome.
~Dean
Comment from Dawnya
well, I hope this stopped the wedding. Viewing animals as objects to be purchased and killed at will definitely points to some early warning signs of psychopathy. I would fear for the groom if the wedding still took place. I think I would work on building the creepiness factor to strengthen the story.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
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well, I hope this stopped the wedding. Viewing animals as objects to be purchased and killed at will definitely points to some early warning signs of psychopathy. I would fear for the groom if the wedding still took place. I think I would work on building the creepiness factor to strengthen the story.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
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Thank you for the excellent review! In my 150 word fictional story, Catzilla died by his own hands...oops, I mean paws. I would suppose eating a gown would kill anyone. I?m glad you stopped by?
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Wedding and a Cat Flash Fiction writing prompt.
Your interesting story is well told.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the Wedding and a Cat Flash Fiction writing prompt.
Your interesting story is well told.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 24-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
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Thank you for your excellent review and well wishes!
All my best,
Sal
Comment from Deb Kincaid
Really cute. So, what did you wear to the wedding? I like your writing, in that, you don't use a lot of unnecessary words. Your words do the work. Loved your beginning, too: about planning for something going wrong. Nice work!
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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
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Really cute. So, what did you wear to the wedding? I like your writing, in that, you don't use a lot of unnecessary words. Your words do the work. Loved your beginning, too: about planning for something going wrong. Nice work!
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Comment Written 24-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
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Thank you for your review and comments. No, my dress was fine. This is is fiction. Just a little fun for the contest.
All my best,
Comment from Raul1
The cat was an evil meanie. I like this poem because it is very humorous and the cat in my mind was flat out frightening. Good luck in the contest! You did good writing a flash fiction.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
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The cat was an evil meanie. I like this poem because it is very humorous and the cat in my mind was flat out frightening. Good luck in the contest! You did good writing a flash fiction.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
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Thank you Raul. I appreciate your review and comments.
All my best,
Sal
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You're welcome!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow - instead of Bridezilla you wrote about Catzilla...although I'm pretty sure the Cat was thinking 'Bridezilla' just before you took him out...:( An interesting write here, and definitely an original one - should definitely stand out! :) ;) :) Good luck in the contest! :) ;)
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
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Wow - instead of Bridezilla you wrote about Catzilla...although I'm pretty sure the Cat was thinking 'Bridezilla' just before you took him out...:( An interesting write here, and definitely an original one - should definitely stand out! :) ;) :) Good luck in the contest! :) ;)
Comment Written 24-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
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Thank you for the review and comments. No, Catzilla was his name. I am, or was, nice. Oh well. It?s fictional for the contest. Lots of fun!
All the best?
