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Chicks Can Just Be MEAN

A little lie wouldn't hurt ...

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Comment from Tia Attwood
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Hi. This is a wonderful little 5'7'5 poem that you have written. Perfect syllable count across all lines. Very well presented.

Great job
Good Luck

Regards
Tia

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2018

Comment from Earl Corp
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Your notes at the end pulled it all together for me. I'm not a fan of the shorter poems but yours made sense, which a lot don't. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2018

reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018
    They are challenging. A great poet who is no longer here recommended dabbling in them. He claimed it sharpened his skills for longer works. I think maybe he was right. If you can manage to say something in a few words, it helps make your longer pieces more to the point. That's the theory anyway. HAHAHA!!! Thanks for the generous words. :))
Comment from Rickie1
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OMG! It took a couple of reads before I connected the Pee Wee to the picture. It made it more funny than the first read. You made smile and then laugh. Well done.

Rickie

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2018

reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018
    Ahh ... always pleased when I can get a laugh. Thanks a million. :))