The Church Is Calling You
Church attendance is way down34 total reviews
Comment from mermaids
I love your words, they capture the good feelings from attending church. I attend church and can relate to your words. The service gives me energy to move forward for the week. You have written an excellent faith based poem.
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I love your words, they capture the good feelings from attending church. I attend church and can relate to your words. The service gives me energy to move forward for the week. You have written an excellent faith based poem.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2018
Comment from tfawcus
This is an invitation that it is hard to ignore. You have made it clear from your words that everyone, no matter what their condition, is welcome and can find succour in the church.
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This is an invitation that it is hard to ignore. You have made it clear from your words that everyone, no matter what their condition, is welcome and can find succour in the church.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2018
Comment from zanya
Yes Church attendance has fallen dramatically in the Western world it seems- why does it seem so uninteresting to the young of today ? Interesting to read some poetic thoughts on the matter
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Yes Church attendance has fallen dramatically in the Western world it seems- why does it seem so uninteresting to the young of today ? Interesting to read some poetic thoughts on the matter
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Comment Written 24-Oct-2018
Comment from PookieBoo
The poem scans very well. Message-wise, though, it doesn't feel particularly persuasive for people who don't already go to church, especially given the collective description of the congregation as arrogant, greedy and immoral! Perhaps more personal detail about the speaker's religious experience would feel more moving and persuasive?
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The poem scans very well. Message-wise, though, it doesn't feel particularly persuasive for people who don't already go to church, especially given the collective description of the congregation as arrogant, greedy and immoral! Perhaps more personal detail about the speaker's religious experience would feel more moving and persuasive?
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Comment Written 24-Oct-2018
