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Comment from damommy
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I was watching a spider web just the other day and was amazed at how many were 'curious and unaware.' However, I love looking at the webs because they're woven in such beautiful designs. Good entry for the contest. Good luck.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018
    Yes, webs are one of Nature?s delicate, amazing sights. Thanks for your positive review
    Hugs,Trisha
Comment from Donka Kristeva
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Witty, original and effective short poem. Word choice and combination make it an instant "hit". A crisp entry with a stunning art work to compliment the message.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018
    Very complimentary, thank you
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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It's just a suggestion for your last line, but I would change it to (For those curiously unaware). Good luck with the contest, best wishes, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018
    Thanks Dolly,
    Hugs, Trisha