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Comment from
damommy
I was watching a spider web just the other day and was amazed at how many were 'curious and unaware.' However, I love looking at the webs because they're woven in such beautiful designs. Good entry for the contest. Good luck.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018
Yes, webs are one of Nature?s delicate, amazing sights. Thanks for your positive review
Hugs,Trisha
Comment from
Donka Kristeva
Witty, original and effective short poem. Word choice and combination make it an instant "hit". A crisp entry with a stunning art work to compliment the message.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018
Very complimentary, thank you
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from
Dolly'sPoems
It's just a suggestion for your last line, but I would change it to (For those curiously unaware). Good luck with the contest, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2018
Thanks Dolly,
Hugs, Trisha
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