Population Explosion
5-7-5 form71 total reviews
Comment from Aussie
Yep, love sure makes the world go round. "If you have never loved or been loved, the world must be a real sad place. Jesus said "you love because I first loved you," and so we do, all sorts of love abounds, not lust or sex but just being there for another person. Love, Kace.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2018
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Yep, love sure makes the world go round. "If you have never loved or been loved, the world must be a real sad place. Jesus said "you love because I first loved you," and so we do, all sorts of love abounds, not lust or sex but just being there for another person. Love, Kace.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2018
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HI Kace, so sorry I'm so late replying Sweetie Pie...my grandkids keep me busy...we wet to Boo Zoo yesterday...and The pumpkin Feast today...they wear you out...LOL...your words Kace are so very true...if you have never loved...or been loved...the world is a real sad place....Jesus came to teach us love...thank you sweet girl for a wonderful review...love you much...Linda xxoo
Comment from jenintorre
This a lovely and very profound little 5-7-5 poem, so uplifting. I really like it and what a wonderful photo you have chosen to go with it. Best wishes. Jen.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2018
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This a lovely and very profound little 5-7-5 poem, so uplifting. I really like it and what a wonderful photo you have chosen to go with it. Best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2018
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Hi Jen, I am so sorry for replying so late...thank you for a wonderful review...and best wishes to you as well...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from meeshu
this is good, so much in love and you don't care who knows it. you never get to old for a P.D.A. A Kiss in a Crowd says Love so Loud.<<<
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2018
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this is good, so much in love and you don't care who knows it. you never get to old for a P.D.A. A Kiss in a Crowd says Love so Loud.<<<
Comment Written 22-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2018
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HI Gray, yes it does...makes you feel so good when the lover you are with...shows how proud he/she is to be with you public...you know it's true...sigh...thank you for a great review my sweet friend...love Linda xxoo
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Linda. This is a nice little poem. It's true when we are with our beloved, there is no one else around but us. Author's note is a good affirmation of your poem.
Marilyn
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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Hi Linda. This is a nice little poem. It's true when we are with our beloved, there is no one else around but us. Author's note is a good affirmation of your poem.
Marilyn
Comment Written 22-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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HI Marilyn, and that is how it should be...sigh...thank you sweet girl for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...Love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from lyenochka
What a great expression of the what it really should be like in love. The "population explosion" of people, who (hopefully) loved enough that they brought more people in the world. In the great number of people, true lovers see only each other. Great little 5-7-5, Linda!
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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What a great expression of the what it really should be like in love. The "population explosion" of people, who (hopefully) loved enough that they brought more people in the world. In the great number of people, true lovers see only each other. Great little 5-7-5, Linda!
Comment Written 22-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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HI Helen, thank you my sweet friend for a wonderful review...
and you are so right...true lovers see only each other...as it should be...thank you...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from justafan
I am a romantic pushover! This is short but packed with power.
I have known this kind of love and every word rang true in my heart.
Thank you so much for sharing.
Always Justafan of yours
Missy
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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I am a romantic pushover! This is short but packed with power.
I have known this kind of love and every word rang true in my heart.
Thank you so much for sharing.
Always Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment Written 22-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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HI Missy, it is a wonderful feeling to have...sigh...like you...I am a romantic pushover...when in love...it's true...thank you my sweet friend for a wonderful review...made me smile...and for allll your lovely stars...and you are always so welcome...love you much...Linda xxoo Have a wonderful evening...
Comment from Sally Law
Is that you and your husband in the photo? Linda, this is sweet! I love this kinda stuff. Can't get enough of it in poetry or prose. It is so good to see your fine work up on FanStory tonight! I hope you are well and good and most of all loved!
Love,
Sal
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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Is that you and your husband in the photo? Linda, this is sweet! I love this kinda stuff. Can't get enough of it in poetry or prose. It is so good to see your fine work up on FanStory tonight! I hope you are well and good and most of all loved!
Love,
Sal
Comment Written 22-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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Hi Sal, no my husband passed at 54 years old...and I sure miss him...my favorite poem...is a love poem...true love is amazing...thank you for a wonderful review my sweet friend...and I hope you have a lovely evening...love right back at you...Linda xxoo
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My dear sweet Linda! I am sorry I forgot that for a moment! Please forgive me? My heart breaks for you! I did review you poem, if not, I will do so today. My mother in law just passed this morning from a long illness. She lived with my husband and I. Life has been a bit difficult lately. My brain has been a little fried!! Have a wonderful love filled day with all those you love. You are such a loving person, I am sure you are surrounded by many!
Love,
Sal
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OH Sally, I am so sorry about your loss...I know how hard it can be to take care of long term illness...please don't worry about my poem...it will be here for years...you take care of you and your husband...your family...may your mother-in-law Rest In Peace...you are an angel...and yes I am surrounded by many who love...thank you...please take care...love you...Linda xxoo
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You are a dear! I am daily blessed knowing that you are here on FanStory! Big hug!
Sal :+)
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thank you for your kind words...and I am blessed to have found a wonderful friend like you...love you...Linda xxoo
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I feel the same way! :+) Sally
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smiling back at you...xxoo love
Comment from HarryT
Correct syllable count. Picture goes well with the content of the poem. Middle line creates a strong emotion bursting upon the reader. Passion is evident in the work.
Nice job.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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Correct syllable count. Picture goes well with the content of the poem. Middle line creates a strong emotion bursting upon the reader. Passion is evident in the work.
Nice job.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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HI Harry, thank you for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Earl Corp
Your graphi and notes at the bottom pulled it al together for me. I'm not a fan of the 5-7-5 format it doesn't allow you to fully develop a poem. If this isnt a contest entry it should be.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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Your graphi and notes at the bottom pulled it al together for me. I'm not a fan of the 5-7-5 format it doesn't allow you to fully develop a poem. If this isnt a contest entry it should be.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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HI Earl, it's not...but thank you so very much for your kind words...I am so glad you like it...God Bless...love Linda xxoo
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Population Explosion", is short, succinct and very much to the point. Each short line of this talented poet's work is woven with the golden threads of truth. To me, this is a six, but unfortunately, I only have fives left.
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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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"Population Explosion", is short, succinct and very much to the point. Each short line of this talented poet's work is woven with the golden threads of truth. To me, this is a six, but unfortunately, I only have fives left.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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HI Duchess, just the thought of your six is more than enough...how are you doing sweet lady????...thank you for a wonderful review you...love you...Linda xxoo
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Hi Linda, my possum!
I'm fine, but this weird weather is a bit hard to take.
It's all over the place....... !(-_-)!
the Duchess x
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I am still in Florida...but I here it is already in the 20's in Illinois...my home...burrrrrr...that is so early yet...take care sweet lady...love you...xxoo
