Just a Crazy Dream
Old and ragged body parts7 total reviews
Comment from Dean Kuch
This is an excellent, well written and rhymed poem for the Your Body contest, Anonymous Poet.
The message I took away from this is to be happy in you're own skin. After all, it is uniquely you.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
~Dean
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2018
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This is an excellent, well written and rhymed poem for the Your Body contest, Anonymous Poet.
The message I took away from this is to be happy in you're own skin. After all, it is uniquely you.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 23-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2018
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Thank you so much for a wonderful review! You're so right and we should relish what we have - especially our humor! Have a grand day!
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The pleasure a
was all mine.
Happy Writing.
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You're welcome and you do the same.
Comment from Pantygynt
since one cannot really compete against the ageing process one might just as well learn to live with it, cope with it even enjoy it because there are things about it that are enjoyable. This would seem to be the message here, and although of the wrong gender to be considered 'hag' I can still identify with the sentiments expressed.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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since one cannot really compete against the ageing process one might just as well learn to live with it, cope with it even enjoy it because there are things about it that are enjoyable. This would seem to be the message here, and although of the wrong gender to be considered 'hag' I can still identify with the sentiments expressed.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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Thanks so much for the great review and so happy you enjoyed! Gender aside, we can all commiserate on the untimeliness of the aging process while accepting its course by learning to just sit back and enjoy the ride! Have a grand day!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh my goodness ... I am still grinnin' and giggling....this could be an aging person (hint, hint...wink, wink) who wakes up some days with everything working just like it should and then some days it feels like the brain didn't tell the joints and the skin to get with the program!!! :) ;) Hilarious and well done! :) :) Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest! :)
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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Oh my goodness ... I am still grinnin' and giggling....this could be an aging person (hint, hint...wink, wink) who wakes up some days with everything working just like it should and then some days it feels like the brain didn't tell the joints and the skin to get with the program!!! :) ;) Hilarious and well done! :) :) Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest! :)
Comment Written 22-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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No "aging" poets roam here (wink...wink)! I am so happy you enjoyed this crazy piece and that its brought some giggles and laughter to your day! Thank you so much for this great review! Have a glorious and fun-filled day!
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello!
Smile for the day!
Well, I cannot go back in time; none of us can. But we can make the best of each day. I have a few "wrinkles, aches, and worn out parts," but they tell my story...and I wouldn't change anything. Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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Hello!
Smile for the day!
Well, I cannot go back in time; none of us can. But we can make the best of each day. I have a few "wrinkles, aches, and worn out parts," but they tell my story...and I wouldn't change anything. Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 22-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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Hi, Mrs. KT! Thanks for the wonderful review! No... we certainly can't go back in time, although memories make us wish we could sometimes! I've always told myself to be proud of every gray hair and wrinkle because, after all... I've earned them! LOL! Thanks again for the wonderful review and have a marvelous day!
Comment from meeshu
this is really a good one, a whole lotta fun. to bad it was only a dream. well written with a bouncy cadence and great rhythm. good luck to you..
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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this is really a good one, a whole lotta fun. to bad it was only a dream. well written with a bouncy cadence and great rhythm. good luck to you..
Comment Written 22-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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Thanks so much for the great review! It was a fun one to create and so happy that you enjoyed the little twist at the end! Have a super day!
Comment from Michele Harber
This poem is adorable, and a very worthy entry in the Your Body contest. I love that, in the end, you decide that being yourself - warts and all - is best overall but, in the interim, I had a good smile reading your path to realization. This poem is humorous and well-written, with excellent rhyme and meter. I wish you luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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This poem is adorable, and a very worthy entry in the Your Body contest. I love that, in the end, you decide that being yourself - warts and all - is best overall but, in the interim, I had a good smile reading your path to realization. This poem is humorous and well-written, with excellent rhyme and meter. I wish you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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So much appreciate the great review! Thank you so very much! Enjoy your day!
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It was my pleasure, and you enjoy your day as well.
Comment from Terry Kay
This poem is sweet and I can feel it too. All my body parts do ache...loved this poem. Always makes me feel better knowing your I'm not alone...just don't get arthritis in your fingers... thanks for the read...
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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This poem is sweet and I can feel it too. All my body parts do ache...loved this poem. Always makes me feel better knowing your I'm not alone...just don't get arthritis in your fingers... thanks for the read...
Comment Written 21-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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Ha! Ha! Feeling it all! Thank you so much for the great review - it was a fun piece to create and greatly appreciate that you enjoyed! Have a wonderful day!
