Perennials of War
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
LOL! Only a mother can get away with that sort of talk with her son. I'm just the same, they wouldn't dare answer me back even at there ages of 44 and 47! But it's not often we do it, is it? I love to remodel my lounge and the bedrooms from time to time, but on a budget. I have to watch out for the sales. Now, we all want to know what Susan was saying to Drew.... :) Well done, my friend. Another excellent part. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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LOL! Only a mother can get away with that sort of talk with her son. I'm just the same, they wouldn't dare answer me back even at there ages of 44 and 47! But it's not often we do it, is it? I love to remodel my lounge and the bedrooms from time to time, but on a budget. I have to watch out for the sales. Now, we all want to know what Susan was saying to Drew.... :) Well done, my friend. Another excellent part. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 22-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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Thank you for the kind review. I have had a few of those talks with my boys.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, So Susan mother had a good talk with Drew, ad I think I know what all that was about, and Jeff knows it as well, which he made no bones of. Susan and Shana seem to be getting on very well. Great chapter. So what is Drew going to do now? All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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Hi Barbara, So Susan mother had a good talk with Drew, ad I think I know what all that was about, and Jeff knows it as well, which he made no bones of. Susan and Shana seem to be getting on very well. Great chapter. So what is Drew going to do now? All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 22-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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Drew has to ponder what his mom says and looks for help from Jeff. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from c_lucas
I think Shana is beginning to like the idea that money is no object. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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I think Shana is beginning to like the idea that money is no object. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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Shana is still Shana. Thank you for the kind review.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Ben Colder
Typical ladies shopping for change. Sounds like my daughters when rearranging their homes. We men bet the walls get painted. LOL. Good one Barbara. Settling in it seems.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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Typical ladies shopping for change. Sounds like my daughters when rearranging their homes. We men bet the walls get painted. LOL. Good one Barbara. Settling in it seems.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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Thank you for the kind review. I do happen to be a female who enjoys redecorating. LOL
Comment from judiverse
This is delightful. It sounds like Susan is really warming to Shana. Or is it just her decorating ideas? Anyhow, I can imaging her telling Drew not to let Shana get away. Drew has been working on it, anyway. It's Shana who's been hard to convince. It looks as if Shana may be on her own for a while. Nothing could go wrong, could it? Excellent and worth six stars. judi
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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This is delightful. It sounds like Susan is really warming to Shana. Or is it just her decorating ideas? Anyhow, I can imaging her telling Drew not to let Shana get away. Drew has been working on it, anyway. It's Shana who's been hard to convince. It looks as if Shana may be on her own for a while. Nothing could go wrong, could it? Excellent and worth six stars. judi
Comment Written 21-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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Yes, something will go wrong, but it isn't what you think. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
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You're very welcome. I'll be curious to see what it is. judi
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Barb
I like how Shana to me that she has found something that drew her interest to help keep her busy other than watch soap operas when she suggest that the foyer should be re-decorated.
Barb, now what part (chapter in your) did Susan had a talk ((with who) with only a mother would understand and why is Jeff so distributed with Anderson?
Gert
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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Hello Barb
I like how Shana to me that she has found something that drew her interest to help keep her busy other than watch soap operas when she suggest that the foyer should be re-decorated.
Barb, now what part (chapter in your) did Susan had a talk ((with who) with only a mother would understand and why is Jeff so distributed with Anderson?
Gert
Comment Written 21-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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I think all this will come out. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Good chapter. They're acting like family now, and it sounds normal. So why can't they BE family? Oh, that's right, it's the father who is the problem... potentially at least. Why not give him a try? He might come around? Surely he can see how well Drew and Shana get along. He's not blind. He must know how they feel by now.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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Good chapter. They're acting like family now, and it sounds normal. So why can't they BE family? Oh, that's right, it's the father who is the problem... potentially at least. Why not give him a try? He might come around? Surely he can see how well Drew and Shana get along. He's not blind. He must know how they feel by now.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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I would love to tell you what's going to happen, but I can't. LOL Thank you for sticking with me.
Comment from tbacha58
Hi Barbara, what a painful story. We the old generation is completely different from the now generation. They think they know everything. I was away for 2 years due to health problems, so i will try to read your story from the beginning. I am so happy to be back. God bless u Terry xoxo I loved the picture of the German Shepard dog it made me cry, as we had one.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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Hi Barbara, what a painful story. We the old generation is completely different from the now generation. They think they know everything. I was away for 2 years due to health problems, so i will try to read your story from the beginning. I am so happy to be back. God bless u Terry xoxo I loved the picture of the German Shepard dog it made me cry, as we had one.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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I am glad you're back and feeling better. Thank you for dropping by.
Comment from Sankey
I like how you put the characters at the end of each chapter. Bob Hartson (Mastery) wanted me to do that with my book but I felt being an autobiography it was not really relevant. What do you think? A bit hard now it is all finished to go back and add more. Another great read. One suggestion. Here's the USA West Coast thing hehe leaving out "of"...Susan's doing most (of)the talking.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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I like how you put the characters at the end of each chapter. Bob Hartson (Mastery) wanted me to do that with my book but I felt being an autobiography it was not really relevant. What do you think? A bit hard now it is all finished to go back and add more. Another great read. One suggestion. Here's the USA West Coast thing hehe leaving out "of"...Susan's doing most (of)the talking.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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I fought putting the list of characters for a long time, but because I usually only post 500 words at a time and it takes forever to get the entire novel posted I decided to go for it. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sandra Piddock
Excellent characterisation and use of dialogue in here, and there's tension in among the mundane. There's a lot going on, and it's not just about remodelling the room. Excellent work.
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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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Excellent characterisation and use of dialogue in here, and there's tension in among the mundane. There's a lot going on, and it's not just about remodelling the room. Excellent work.
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Comment Written 21-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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Thank you for understanding the plot.
