Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

Author expressively speaks her guilt feeling that she carried lifetime by not disclosing the truth to her beloved father; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018

My father cried when I left with the married man. By the time I realized how wrong I was my father had passed away. I find it hard to forgive myself.

Comment from Ann Marie Anglin

Excellent

This is so poignant. Beautifully done and complete in so few words. I always tell my daughter to be careful what she does and says to the people she loves; you can't take it back, once said or done, and the damage is permanent. And so is the guilt. Great job. All the best, Ann Marie

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018

Thanks. Yep, you can't take the bad things back. I only wish I had told my father how sorry I was before he passed away.

Comment from Anntonette

Excellent

We make mistakes, that's how we learn from them. Sorry for your loss, stay strong. Hope things are better now and you found a husband to keep! Good luck in the contest!
- Anntonette J

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 Comment Written 21-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018

Thanks. The guy did get a divorce and marry me eventually. It didn't last long because he soon was chasing another young thing. I only wish I could have told my father how sorry I was before he passed away.