Giraffe Junior (girunior)
A 5-7-5 poem21 total reviews
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
OH, I love giraffes so much. Your first line has that internal rhyme and it works so well. Your oil painting is another stunner! Your second line, "stands in front of mom's dark spots" was precious. It tells the story of your artwork perfectly.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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OH, I love giraffes so much. Your first line has that internal rhyme and it works so well. Your oil painting is another stunner! Your second line, "stands in front of mom's dark spots" was precious. It tells the story of your artwork perfectly.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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Thank you Cindy. What?s not to like about gentle giraffes? Thanks for the great review
Comment from Pantygynt
The spots are meant to camouflage the giraffe against the bush background of its habitat. I nevere thought of it working this way as well though. The whole of this 5-7-5 is an aha moment. Lol.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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The spots are meant to camouflage the giraffe against the bush background of its habitat. I nevere thought of it working this way as well though. The whole of this 5-7-5 is an aha moment. Lol.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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So, it is a haiku? I was not sure the satori was strong enough. Thanks for a great review
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Probably not because the aha is not confined to the last line but relies on the earlier lines and the picture for that mater.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem. Babies and the young animals always feel most comfortable when their mothers are nearby. They will seldom cry and just needs the mother's presence.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem. Babies and the young animals always feel most comfortable when their mothers are nearby. They will seldom cry and just needs the mother's presence.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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Thank you Sandra for your wonderful review
Comment from Mastery
Wonderful! This is another fine poem, Pam. Your satori is enlightening every time. and your accompanying artwork is priceless. Good job, God bless you. :) Bob
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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Wonderful! This is another fine poem, Pam. Your satori is enlightening every time. and your accompanying artwork is priceless. Good job, God bless you. :) Bob
Comment Written 21-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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Wow. Thank you Bob so much for the extra star. I appreciate it and your fine review
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You deserved it,Pam. :) Bob
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Such precious words here Pam, and I dare say most of them that are born in captivity survive vey well, your words and comforting, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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Such precious words here Pam, and I dare say most of them that are born in captivity survive vey well, your words and comforting, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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Thank you Dolly for another lovely review
Comment from Anntonette
This is very neat! Camouflaging is a great and safe way to hide from their predators. The mother is also protecting the baby giraffe. Thanks for sharing yet another great work!
- Anntonette J
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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This is very neat! Camouflaging is a great and safe way to hide from their predators. The mother is also protecting the baby giraffe. Thanks for sharing yet another great work!
- Anntonette J
Comment Written 21-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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Thank you Anntonette for another wonderful review. Nice to see you tonight
Comment from Kelly Grim
Love this! I love these 3 line poems of yours! I know I've said it before, but it's so true! "In front of mom's dark spots" -- so good! And giraffe calves are so precious, aren't they? The zoo near me just had one earlier this summer! Soooo cute! I love the warm, safe feeling this poem creates! Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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Love this! I love these 3 line poems of yours! I know I've said it before, but it's so true! "In front of mom's dark spots" -- so good! And giraffe calves are so precious, aren't they? The zoo near me just had one earlier this summer! Soooo cute! I love the warm, safe feeling this poem creates! Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 21-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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Thank you Kelly for your really wonderful review. Nice to see you tonight
Comment from jenintorre
Delightful poem, delightful painting. As usual. Thanks for the info on the different color spots. This is a really nice 5-7-5 poem. Very enjoyable. Smiles, Jen.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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Delightful poem, delightful painting. As usual. Thanks for the info on the different color spots. This is a really nice 5-7-5 poem. Very enjoyable. Smiles, Jen.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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Thank you Jen for another rad review!
Comment from lyenochka
Very cool! I like how your junior giraffe does look so content and peaceful. It's amazing how fast the baby giraffes are able to stand and I like how you contrast the different shades of the spots!
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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Very cool! I like how your junior giraffe does look so content and peaceful. It's amazing how fast the baby giraffes are able to stand and I like how you contrast the different shades of the spots!
Comment Written 21-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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Thank you Helen. I might look this up. I think the spots get darker with age. Thank you for a wonderful review
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
Giraffes are such an elegant, beautiful animal and your word give a lovely image of a girunor (that's a new word for me) in it's Mother's shadow.
Excellent 5-7-5
Gorgeous picture
Mitchell
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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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Giraffes are such an elegant, beautiful animal and your word give a lovely image of a girunor (that's a new word for me) in it's Mother's shadow.
Excellent 5-7-5
Gorgeous picture
Mitchell
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Comment Written 21-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018
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Thank you Mitchell. The actual name of the painting is Girunior for giraffe junior. Guess I am weird
