Comment from Cranial Thinker

Exceptional

To say that it is when in truth it is not confuses the mind of clay not willing to sit quietly listening to the warmth of that incoming breeze which is a reflective spirit understanding those true workings that are so very deeply shrouded in that of clay's nonacceptance of its duality born of realities birth because if it did that mystery would factually not exist...Oh, what of humanites gifts in spritual searchings were the mind of man can complete itself through quietness and meditatively listening attentively...Truly a wonderfully deep and purposeful write...Cranial Thinker

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2018

Thanks Cranial wonderfully boarded review and your ongoing support. Your comments are appreciated. Blessings, Darren

Comment from Liz O'Neill

Excellent

So now you have us contemplating the freeness of our will again. My high self which is my Higher Power internalized know what is best for me. but it struggles with my lower self which wants to force thing to go the way it thinks they should. My higher self. Lets things unfold as they will. My best phrase for me is everything is exactly the way it is supposed to be right now. So maybe what happens to me is now related to freedom for me but i can free my attitude toward it. Enough for now.

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2018

Miss O'Neal you have really captured the essence of this and it helps me to see that it is an ongoing struggle not only with our community around us and them people that we interact with but also and internal conflict. I really appreciate your uplifting and insightful comments here. Blessings, Darren

Comment from rama devi

Excellent

YEs yes yes. Tons of wisdom here, delivered with deft word economy and lucid enlightened clarity! Bravo. Favorite parts:

some call it free will
however, free it is not
it will cost your life

POWERFULLY VOICED!

the life of our flesh
will end inevitably
your spirit will be

Excellent PHONETICS with L sounds and alliterated E

to contain complete
comprehension of the light,
dark you must first know

Insightful TRUTH delivered with simplicity that is potent...and great alliteration of C

Bravo!
No sixes left...

Love,
rd

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2018

I was actually thinking of you when I wrote this thinking that if she's going to read something of mine I hope that it is the powerful will. I just wrote one called Will Power
which was the inspiration for this for a co-worker. I published a book it's available on Amazon it's called
A Balanced Blend of Blues whenever I give or sell a book, I always write an original poem in the back this was for my coworker Willl

Thanks for you wonderful review

Blessings,

Brother Badger

reply by rama devi on 19-Oct-2018

Wow, how wonderful you thought of me, my friend. Nice that you write a fresh poem for each book-buyer. That's innovative! :-)))

Blessings, rd

reply by the author on 19-Oct-2018

Here's one for you,
Rama Devi
what we'll do,
is we will try to see-
Just
how much we can truly
Enlighten our readers. . .

reply by rama devi on 19-Oct-2018

Yay! :-))) Thanks!

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This Haiku tells if you wish to be completely free, learn; if you wish to feel darkness, learn what is light; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2018

Thank you for your wonderful comments your input and consistent Fellowship here
Blessings,

Brother Badger

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very interesting poem in the haiku/lanturne suite format. You used very good words and very good imagery from the art work. Free will can get us in trouble unless we let the Lord lead us and guide us by His Holy Spirit! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2018

Thanks Teri, I appreciate your warm reviews your comments and your consistent Fellowship here.

Blessings,

Brother Badger