Friends
A 4 line poem21 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork, Christine.
-Your note is appreciated.
-Syllable count is good.
-A very good entry about friendship,
and the importance of it.
-I like how you show the
ways friendship comes about.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
-Good artwork, Christine.
-Your note is appreciated.
-Syllable count is good.
-A very good entry about friendship,
and the importance of it.
-I like how you show the
ways friendship comes about.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
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Hi Pam Thank you and my thought were also about my FS friends who I am getting to know and appreciate like you Your support is enjoyed and really appreciated Cheers Christine
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You are welcome, Christine, and thanks for sharing. You are a good friend I have gotten to know, as well. A good poem to have shared.
Comment from rspoet
Hello Christine,
I love it when a short, succinct poem captures the theme perfectly.
Extra words would merely dilute the impact.
Perfect use of alliteration with exactly four the "C" words
reflecting the four friends.
Beautifully done, my friend.
Good luck in the contest!
Robert
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
Hello Christine,
I love it when a short, succinct poem captures the theme perfectly.
Extra words would merely dilute the impact.
Perfect use of alliteration with exactly four the "C" words
reflecting the four friends.
Beautifully done, my friend.
Good luck in the contest!
Robert
Comment Written 21-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2018
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Hi Robert, Thank so much, your stars are really lovely and I feel honoured to receive them. I though about this one and hope is resonates for many and also Include my FS friends made over the past few years. I do so enjoy your support and friendship Many Cheers For the good luck .I am glad you saw my c connection Christine
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
Hi Chrissy
For a four line poem this had such depth and volume.
The journey of a friendship is pitched so well throughout this marvellous poem, it touched me.
And what a lovely picture to accompany your words.
Loved it
Mitchell
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2018
Hi Chrissy
For a four line poem this had such depth and volume.
The journey of a friendship is pitched so well throughout this marvellous poem, it touched me.
And what a lovely picture to accompany your words.
Loved it
Mitchell
Comment Written 20-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2018
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Hi Mitchell .Wow, Thank you so much for your lovely compliment for my 4 lined poem and your generous shower of the exceptional star rating .I am glad I thought about my words for this one and friends come from everywhere seen and inseen. Yoir high praise is so appreciated .Cheers my FS friend Christine.
Comment from Boogienights
Excellent! You have accurately described friends . I have never had many friends, but those I did have were very close to me. They add a lot to life and are precious.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2018
Excellent! You have accurately described friends . I have never had many friends, but those I did have were very close to me. They add a lot to life and are precious.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2018
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Hi Boogienights, Thank you for your review and ones friends are precious often more like family. You say did have I am sure tou still have some and they love you and enrich your life. Cheers Christine
Comment from Gloria ....
Such a nice feeling of warmth emanating from your poem, Christine. Friends are so important and yes selected by choice and stick together by choice.
This is a fine entry into the contest and I wish you much luck with the Committee. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2018
Such a nice feeling of warmth emanating from your poem, Christine. Friends are so important and yes selected by choice and stick together by choice.
This is a fine entry into the contest and I wish you much luck with the Committee. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 20-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2018
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Hi Gloria, Thanks for a read and review my FS friend and yes our choices are important and friends are selected from the many pool of people one comes across in life. often more like family and make us feel important in their lives also Cheers And I will wait and see. Rarely do any good in committee contests. Cheers Christine
Comment from Michele Harber
What an absolutely perfect description and definition of friends: "connected by chance, selected by choice." You express a beautiful sentiment in only 20 syllables, and perfectly meet the parameters of the Four Line Poem contest. I wish you luck in the judging.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2018
What an absolutely perfect description and definition of friends: "connected by chance, selected by choice." You express a beautiful sentiment in only 20 syllables, and perfectly meet the parameters of the Four Line Poem contest. I wish you luck in the judging.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2018
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Hi Michele, Thank you and this made me think when I began with the first word Friends so I just thought about how we make friends and the rest seemed to follow. So you comments reflect my thoughts nicely and Cheers for your luck in the judging Christine
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You're very welcome.
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a really nice four-line poem about friendship. Where would we be without them. Nicely illustrated, too. Good luck in the contest with this fine entry. Marilyn
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2018
This is a really nice four-line poem about friendship. Where would we be without them. Nicely illustrated, too. Good luck in the contest with this fine entry. Marilyn
Comment Written 20-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2018
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Hi Marilyn, Thank so much and yes it would be a sad world without friends who are often as important as family. I also enjoy my FS friends friendship and connection with you included Cheers Christine
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Same here, Christine.
Comment from lyenochka
Love it, Christine! You used this format well to give us a message that we all agree with. We all need good friends and friends make our lives so much more fun and bearable.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2018
Love it, Christine! You used this format well to give us a message that we all agree with. We all need good friends and friends make our lives so much more fun and bearable.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2018
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Hi Helen, Thank you and yes we do need good friends to enrich our lives and often come from many walks of life. I also enjoy my FS friends connection too Cheers Christine
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a sweet and honest write Christine and friends can be such a support and I am glad of mine, they bring me joy all the time, your words resonated with me, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2018
This is a sweet and honest write Christine and friends can be such a support and I am glad of mine, they bring me joy all the time, your words resonated with me, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2018
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Hi Dolly, Thank you so much for your review and support for this poem I too am so glad of mine and love to catch up. My FS friends are also important. wouldn't it be great to have a FS convention we could meet each other. Cheers Christine
Comment from karenina
I am at a certain point in my life where I am so delighted to be able to choose my friends...because family, alas, does not ALWAYS put the FUN in dysfunctional...and as the saying goes you can pick your friends but not your family. ARGH!
Karenina
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2018
I am at a certain point in my life where I am so delighted to be able to choose my friends...because family, alas, does not ALWAYS put the FUN in dysfunctional...and as the saying goes you can pick your friends but not your family. ARGH!
Karenina
Comment Written 19-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2018
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Hi Karenina. Thanks for your review and many of my friends are like my family so blessed both ways. i am fortunate that my family are all great amd we catch up as often as possible. bit I know some families are dysfunctional so no Fun I hope you have many friends to keep you happy Cheers Christine