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An Oral Lore Library

Words not written, but remembered.

4 total reviews 
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
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Really enjoyed this Michael, wonderfully written with thoughts well and truly outside the box.
Loved the graphics and accompanying picture which marry with your words brilliantly.
Congratulations on your second place....fully deserved
Best wishes
Mitchell

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2018

Comment from hari anand
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How you manage to do it everytime, no one can beat your thought process, beyond imagination, A big salute! Thank you again for raising the bar of this one too.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2018

Comment from Earl Corp
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This was an interesting take on the library concept. I like the line " Go ask your mother." Its a truth that a lot of family stories are locked in the minds of our parents and grandparents and it's up to us to seek them out. As far as a three line poem this is among the best i wish you luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2018

Comment from meeshu
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I enjoyed reading this work a great deal. The imagery is fantastic even in this short form. Well done, Contestant. also very clever end..

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2018