Where'd You Go?
M.T.A (Missing The Action)25 total reviews
Comment from Terry Kay
This is a jewel. What a brilliant display of your gifted writing skills. Best humorous poem I have ever read. I laughed so hard...great job...do it again please...Give yourself two hugs from me....Terry Kay
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2018
This is a jewel. What a brilliant display of your gifted writing skills. Best humorous poem I have ever read. I laughed so hard...great job...do it again please...Give yourself two hugs from me....Terry Kay
Comment Written 19-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2018
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Wow! Thanks for this great review and the six stars..it made my day. :)
Comment from Michele Harber
I thought this was the most ridiculous writing prompt, but you used it to create a poem that was clever and charming and had me laughing out loud. Your rhymes were very well done and completely unforced, and you turned a ridiculous prompt into a phenomenal poem. I'm sorry you weren't able to enter this in the contest, as I can't imagine how it wouldn't have won.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2018
I thought this was the most ridiculous writing prompt, but you used it to create a poem that was clever and charming and had me laughing out loud. Your rhymes were very well done and completely unforced, and you turned a ridiculous prompt into a phenomenal poem. I'm sorry you weren't able to enter this in the contest, as I can't imagine how it wouldn't have won.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2018
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Thanks so much. I was disappointed about the contest, but this wonderful review made up for that. Thank you for the six stars..it made my weekend. :)
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Thank you for the best laugh I've had in ages!
Comment from Karol Bond
That truly has to be one of the most unusual poems I've ever read. I absolutely loved it. The image was perfect too.Thank you for the smile. You cured my blues. ;)
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2018
That truly has to be one of the most unusual poems I've ever read. I absolutely loved it. The image was perfect too.Thank you for the smile. You cured my blues. ;)
Comment Written 19-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2018
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I'm so glad you liked it...my daughters were a little embarrassed by it though when I read it to them...lol.
Comment from country ranch writer
Even though you made it into a poem it was a good read ANYWAYS. eNJOYED HIS ESCAPADES THROUGH FLYING TROUGH THE AIR AND BACK.
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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2018
Even though you made it into a poem it was a good read ANYWAYS. eNJOYED HIS ESCAPADES THROUGH FLYING TROUGH THE AIR AND BACK.
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Comment Written 18-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2018
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Thank you! A little different from what I usually write, but I like the challenge. :)
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Comment from heart of Lou
Um...I think you still didn't read carefully enough. You were supposed to write something about flying PENS. As in, the one you write with. ;) Just Kidding. I never saw that contest, but you sure have some imagination. I only hope the thing doesn't land on my head.
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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2018
Um...I think you still didn't read carefully enough. You were supposed to write something about flying PENS. As in, the one you write with. ;) Just Kidding. I never saw that contest, but you sure have some imagination. I only hope the thing doesn't land on my head.
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Comment Written 18-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2018
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Thanks for reading my silly poem. My husband thought it was funny....I appreciate your comments. : )