urgent time to Ecraterate!
Keeping Democrats out of power to save our nation !30 total reviews
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Bravo! I can't believe anyone except illegal immigrants vote for Democrats. My father was a lifelong Republican. He passed away. Since then he has voted Democrat.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2018
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Bravo! I can't believe anyone except illegal immigrants vote for Democrats. My father was a lifelong Republican. He passed away. Since then he has voted Democrat.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2018
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Thank you so sincerely Thomas, for your wonderful review and very generous stars, so sincerely appreciated. I hope to see you again often and wish you all the best in all you do! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
Well, this little rant is very well put together. Not being American though I found the extent of the vitriol kind of amusing. perhaps even hypocritical in a way, given how the US was created and its charter...
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2018
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Hi there,
Well, this little rant is very well put together. Not being American though I found the extent of the vitriol kind of amusing. perhaps even hypocritical in a way, given how the US was created and its charter...
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 12-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2018
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Thanks giraffmang, for your interesting, although somewhat unclear review! Not sure how the original creation of USA aligns with the totally destructive, combat entertained by the modern day CRATS? But to me, the inability of American Citizens to clearly recognize the Democrats intention to reach power by combat and destruction of those supposedly on the same team is absolutely astounding! It seems we have just become the nation of Creators, attempting to survive the nation of Wreckers! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from Sanku
I can understand your point od view. in india the middle class dream is to go to US and then become its citizen. I feel doling out green cards and citizen ships have to be restricted.
I know some person who is a software engineer and was sent to Us on a work visa .When his wife got pregnant she went to US ( she was working in India at that time) so that her child will be born there and would automatically get the citizenship.
This policy has led to rampant migration.
I am sorry the dems were not kept away.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018
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I can understand your point od view. in india the middle class dream is to go to US and then become its citizen. I feel doling out green cards and citizen ships have to be restricted.
I know some person who is a software engineer and was sent to Us on a work visa .When his wife got pregnant she went to US ( she was working in India at that time) so that her child will be born there and would automatically get the citizenship.
This policy has led to rampant migration.
I am sorry the dems were not kept away.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018
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Thanks so much Sanku, for your kind and generous review, so much appreciated! I hope to see you often! HIS GRAYNESS Vance
Comment from meeshu
the 'Dims' are in a corner, their captive voting blocks are starting to think for themselves. e.g. women and African-Americans. they desperately need the masses from south of the border. you call 'em like you see 'em, Vance. I like that...................meeshu
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018
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the 'Dims' are in a corner, their captive voting blocks are starting to think for themselves. e.g. women and African-Americans. they desperately need the masses from south of the border. you call 'em like you see 'em, Vance. I like that...................meeshu
Comment Written 10-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018
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Thanks sincerely meeshu, for your generous review and stars, so much appreciated! please stay tuned! Vance
Comment from Sizzle-Lynn
First off, I got quite a chuckle out of you coining your own word - Ecraterate - and using it in the title. That was a bold choice and I like it!
I see this as an impassioned plea to all voters; it's obvious you feel strongly about this subject and wish to persuade the reader to vote Republican. Since before the term "government" was first coined, humans have held and argued over different political preferences. I believe all are entitled to their opinion, which is why I want to clarify that my rating is not based on the content of your piece, but rather its syntax and structure, punctuation, wording, and style.
Passion in writing can be a good thing, as it often makes for an energizing and inspirational read. However, when writing or speaking on topics we feel strongly about, it is easy to let emotion drive our thoughts, which can lead to less coherent writing/speaking. When this occurs, it can be useful to take a step back and spend extra time editing the final product. I would suggest you read it through, paying special attention to things like capitalization and punctuation (i.e. cut down on the exclamation points), varying sentence lengths (i.e. too many long sentences), and word choice. ***For example, in the first sentence you could try replacing "comes" with "draws" so that it reads; "As election time draws near,".*** In many cases, at least in my humble opinion, good writing is as much about style and flow as it is about riveting content, and I think a little close editing would improve the piece overall.
Once again, props on inventing a new word/phrase, and good luck in all your future writing endeavors.
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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2018
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First off, I got quite a chuckle out of you coining your own word - Ecraterate - and using it in the title. That was a bold choice and I like it!
I see this as an impassioned plea to all voters; it's obvious you feel strongly about this subject and wish to persuade the reader to vote Republican. Since before the term "government" was first coined, humans have held and argued over different political preferences. I believe all are entitled to their opinion, which is why I want to clarify that my rating is not based on the content of your piece, but rather its syntax and structure, punctuation, wording, and style.
Passion in writing can be a good thing, as it often makes for an energizing and inspirational read. However, when writing or speaking on topics we feel strongly about, it is easy to let emotion drive our thoughts, which can lead to less coherent writing/speaking. When this occurs, it can be useful to take a step back and spend extra time editing the final product. I would suggest you read it through, paying special attention to things like capitalization and punctuation (i.e. cut down on the exclamation points), varying sentence lengths (i.e. too many long sentences), and word choice. ***For example, in the first sentence you could try replacing "comes" with "draws" so that it reads; "As election time draws near,".*** In many cases, at least in my humble opinion, good writing is as much about style and flow as it is about riveting content, and I think a little close editing would improve the piece overall.
Once again, props on inventing a new word/phrase, and good luck in all your future writing endeavors.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2018
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Thanks for your perspectives Sizzle-Lyn, no matter how good or bad, they are always appreciated as it always identifies the range of thoughts created by one's writings, which I personally consider valuable. All the best! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from Bill Schott
This script (which of course is not a script), Urgent Time to Ecraterate, decries the do-gooder, liberal Demon-crats for wanting to put everyone on welfare and get everyone else to pay for it. As a sentiment in a paragraph, this will do. As a script, it's a nonstarter.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2018
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This script (which of course is not a script), Urgent Time to Ecraterate, decries the do-gooder, liberal Demon-crats for wanting to put everyone on welfare and get everyone else to pay for it. As a sentiment in a paragraph, this will do. As a script, it's a nonstarter.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2018
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Thanks Bill, for your kind review and always valuable perspectives.
Comment from Lady Jane
A(s) election
time (draws) near, - edit suggestion
"E crat erasion,(")
(T)hey always have in the past(,) and their mission has worked(.) AMERICANS suffer the loss of jobs, loss of personal safety and security, complex healthcare problems etc (following said vote).
Don't let this happen this election please(,) HIS GRAYNESS(!)
Well, I agree something needs to give. WE need to vote our conscience and stop saying, 'my vote doesn't count,' or 'why bother?" Everyone needs to have their voices matter and counted among the masses. Well written pleading, dear. Thanks for sharing.
janelle
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2018
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A(s) election
time (draws) near, - edit suggestion
"E crat erasion,(")
(T)hey always have in the past(,) and their mission has worked(.) AMERICANS suffer the loss of jobs, loss of personal safety and security, complex healthcare problems etc (following said vote).
Don't let this happen this election please(,) HIS GRAYNESS(!)
Well, I agree something needs to give. WE need to vote our conscience and stop saying, 'my vote doesn't count,' or 'why bother?" Everyone needs to have their voices matter and counted among the masses. Well written pleading, dear. Thanks for sharing.
janelle
Comment Written 04-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2018
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Thank you sincerely JaCherie, for your very kind and generous review and stars, much appreciated! I did recognize that in writing such a biased work, it would likely put the overall writing at risk of ones political view and bounce bias back upon this work. Thanks for your open mind and kind review much sincerely appreciated! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
Hi Vance, as someone who is over the other side of the pond, these debates always seem to be one sided and unbalanced...it's nice to read another point of view...after all Mr T was voted in by the majority.
A very enlightening read
Mitchell
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018
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Hi Vance, as someone who is over the other side of the pond, these debates always seem to be one sided and unbalanced...it's nice to read another point of view...after all Mr T was voted in by the majority.
A very enlightening read
Mitchell
Comment Written 04-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2018
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Dear YNWA, Thanks sincerely for your kind review and feedback and I certainly apologize for any ANGST of unfairness my work may seem to have reflected, but I am deeply confident that my assessment of the intentions of and dangers of the Democ rats (emphasis on RATS) is very accurate and shameful to all that stands for AMERICA! Unfortunately, that shall be proven very shortly as their actions toward the illegal aliens will soon be very strong proof thereof! Best wishes and thanks for your very kind review. HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from LIJ Red
Never have I seen such lopsided media reporting, so I don't know if there are actually two caravans of illegal immigrants, over 10,000 strong, bearing down on our border...but it sounds scary. Well written opinion.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018
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Never have I seen such lopsided media reporting, so I don't know if there are actually two caravans of illegal immigrants, over 10,000 strong, bearing down on our border...but it sounds scary. Well written opinion.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2018
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There are more than two caravans now and even more expected! Be sure that no good will come from this and also be sure to thank your Democrats for their aid and support of this awesome mess. as they smile and plan to have thousands of more voters who will push the buttons on election day for them, in spite of the crimes, the deaths, the job losses, the tax increases, and all the awful harm they will bring to our country! the Crats are now dancing in joy as America faces a truly ugly assault! Don't listen to the rotten media who will only try to blame Trump for the hell to come,..thanks to the Crats!! HIS GRAYNESS
Comment from tbacha58
Hi Vance you're writing i am sure influenced a lot of writers who agree with your opinion to comment. I don't like politics, so just to say hi and hope you are doing great. Love Terry xoxo
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2018
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Hi Vance you're writing i am sure influenced a lot of writers who agree with your opinion to comment. I don't like politics, so just to say hi and hope you are doing great. Love Terry xoxo
Comment Written 23-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2018
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Thanks Terry for your very kind and thoughtful review! Sorry to engage in politics here on Fanstory, but we are right now facing some extremely serious issues that need the attention of all Americans as our borders are immediately at risk as well as the dark intentions of the Democrats to destroy everything Trump has achieved to the good of our Country. Bless you! Vance!
