The Curtain Goes Up
VIBES contest entry3 total reviews
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Hello there, this is a lovely little 5-7-5 for the vibe contest. This gives of a great vibe. lol. You make it sound wonderfully thrilling:)) Good luck! ~Kerry
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2018
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Hello there, this is a lovely little 5-7-5 for the vibe contest. This gives of a great vibe. lol. You make it sound wonderfully thrilling:)) Good luck! ~Kerry
Comment Written 17-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2018
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Dear Kerry, Thank you for your comments, rating, and good luck wishes. Donna
Comment from RodG
There is nothing like opening night for any actor or actress and the vibes he feels from the audience's ovation. I think your point could be emphasized better with a different verb than "course." That verb has a negative connotation for me.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2018
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There is nothing like opening night for any actor or actress and the vibes he feels from the audience's ovation. I think your point could be emphasized better with a different verb than "course." That verb has a negative connotation for me.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2018
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Dear RodG, Thank you for your comments and suggestion. I will go in and edit. Dove
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem and entry for the vibes contest
There is a rush in acting, performing, playing music
few know unless they have experienced it
Interesting art work
Nicely done
Good luck in the voting
RS
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2018
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This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem and entry for the vibes contest
There is a rush in acting, performing, playing music
few know unless they have experienced it
Interesting art work
Nicely done
Good luck in the voting
RS
Comment Written 17-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2018
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Dear rspoet, Thank you for your comments and rating, and good luck wishes. Dove
