Bird on a Branch
A 5-7-5 poem19 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
HI Pam, LOL....LOL....I love it...but I love watching birds...they are amazing to watch them fly...
I love your poem sweet girl...and love Rugsy...the bird...LOL...very nicely written you...and a beautiful picture...Love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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HI Pam, LOL....LOL....I love it...but I love watching birds...they are amazing to watch them fly...
I love your poem sweet girl...and love Rugsy...the bird...LOL...very nicely written you...and a beautiful picture...Love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 21-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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Thank you Linda for your delightful review
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you are sooooo very welcome my sweet friend...love you...xxoo
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The first two lines of this poem flow
and connect well. The last line puts the poem all
together. The artwork is perfect and compliments the
theme and words of this poem.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2018
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Excellent Poem! The first two lines of this poem flow
and connect well. The last line puts the poem all
together. The artwork is perfect and compliments the
theme and words of this poem.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2018
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Thank you harmony13 for your wonderful review. Nice to see you today
Comment from Teri7
Pam, This is another very well written 5-7-5 poem with a delightful oil painting picture of the pretty little bird. I like his name. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. You paint really well my friend! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2018
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Pam, This is another very well written 5-7-5 poem with a delightful oil painting picture of the pretty little bird. I like his name. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. You paint really well my friend! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 18-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2018
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Thank you Teri for all of your encouragement and the awesome review
Comment from Monica L. Moraca
Not only are you a great poet, but also a great painter! I love how you create art work and from that image words flow depicting the story behind it. You convey an important message and that is, we all should have confidence in ourselves and take control of our destiny for it is a solo act.
Well done and thanks for sharing :)
Monica
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2018
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Not only are you a great poet, but also a great painter! I love how you create art work and from that image words flow depicting the story behind it. You convey an important message and that is, we all should have confidence in ourselves and take control of our destiny for it is a solo act.
Well done and thanks for sharing :)
Monica
Comment Written 18-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2018
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Thank you again Monica for another lovely review
Comment from Boogienights
As it should. I think birds are lovely and fascinating, I love their music when they sing. I love your bird, its amazng. Thanks for sharing. Once again a beautiful painting!!!!!
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2018
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As it should. I think birds are lovely and fascinating, I love their music when they sing. I love your bird, its amazng. Thanks for sharing. Once again a beautiful painting!!!!!
Comment Written 18-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2018
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Thank you Boogie for such an awesome review. Nice to see you tonight
Comment from Tia Attwood
Hi
pretty bird on branch (5)
poses self with confidence (7)
voted best in show (5)
Beautiful little 5'7''5 poem. perfect syllable count across all lines.
Love mother nature.
Great Job
Regards
Tia
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2018
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Hi
pretty bird on branch (5)
poses self with confidence (7)
voted best in show (5)
Beautiful little 5'7''5 poem. perfect syllable count across all lines.
Love mother nature.
Great Job
Regards
Tia
Comment Written 18-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2018
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Thank you Toa for your really lovely review. Nice to see you today
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Thank you Toa for your really lovely review. Nice to see you today
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Thank you Toa for your really lovely review. Nice to see you today
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Yep a cutie alright Pam. The color combinations so elegantly accommodate your poem. Looking at Mr. Rugsby grows on ya in it's little pose on the branch. Pam when you get a chance I want you to look up this Author Baustian64 and read his writing "20 years!" I reached out to him or it maybe a female, I'm not sure but regardless of gender, they're in a lot of emotional pain. Just read the writing and get back to me.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018
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Yep a cutie alright Pam. The color combinations so elegantly accommodate your poem. Looking at Mr. Rugsby grows on ya in it's little pose on the branch. Pam when you get a chance I want you to look up this Author Baustian64 and read his writing "20 years!" I reached out to him or it maybe a female, I'm not sure but regardless of gender, they're in a lot of emotional pain. Just read the writing and get back to me.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018
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Thank you so much again, Mary for another six star rating. You really spoil me. I did read 20 years and reviewed it. You can read my review if you want. Thank you for a fabulous review
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My pleasure
Comment from Hayley Zemontas
A beautiful painting and 5-7-5. Thanks for including the story of how the bird came to be. The fact that you created this bird purely from the confines of your imagination is wonderful in itself and even more so that he is named after your husband. X
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018
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A beautiful painting and 5-7-5. Thanks for including the story of how the bird came to be. The fact that you created this bird purely from the confines of your imagination is wonderful in itself and even more so that he is named after your husband. X
Comment Written 17-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018
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Hi Hayley. My husband tried to name the painting Rugsy but it?s title is the same as the poem?s. Thank you for another delightful review
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Oh I see haha x
Comment from Tina Crute
It looks like a Rugsy! Its all different colors...not saying your husband is, lol.
He does look like he is posing:) This poem makes me wonder if animals have any vanity.
I get excited whenever I see your work because I like every one of them! It must give you such fulfillment to be able to do this
I hope you are going to make a book of these?
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018
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It looks like a Rugsy! Its all different colors...not saying your husband is, lol.
He does look like he is posing:) This poem makes me wonder if animals have any vanity.
I get excited whenever I see your work because I like every one of them! It must give you such fulfillment to be able to do this
I hope you are going to make a book of these?
Comment Written 17-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018
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Hi Tina. Thank you so much for all of your encouragement. I plan to make a binder for the family archives. Maybe only one. We will see. My health is very bad, so I hope I have time for that. Thank you for your wonderful review
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I'm so sorry about your
health . I can tell you
are very special person
with lots of talent :-) Binder
Is a good idea. These
Will be cherished by
family!
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Smile
Comment from June Sargent
Rugsy is beautiful! I love the tones of his feathers and the mauve background. No wonder he won best of show. Fictional or not, the art is lovely and the poetry is haiku at its best. I enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018
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Rugsy is beautiful! I love the tones of his feathers and the mauve background. No wonder he won best of show. Fictional or not, the art is lovely and the poetry is haiku at its best. I enjoyed it.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018
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Thank you so much June for all of your encouragement. I am looking forward to painting again. I was thinking about your dance poem. And you are right. I could not paint because the carpet. Made it too hard for my wheelchair wheels. So we are having tile replace the carpet in most of the house. So I did what was needed to paint again. Just what your poem said to do. Thank you for your delightful review
