With All Senses Composing
5-7-5 Music10 total reviews
Comment from Tia Attwood
Hi
*.*.*Congratulations*.*.* on winning the 5'7'5 music poetry prompt.
An excellent little 5'7'5 poem with perfect syllable count across all lines and well presented.
Great job
Regards
Tia
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Hi
*.*.*Congratulations*.*.* on winning the 5'7'5 music poetry prompt.
An excellent little 5'7'5 poem with perfect syllable count across all lines and well presented.
Great job
Regards
Tia
Comment Written 18-Oct-2018
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about music and how easy it is to listen with our soul and open our hearts. With our without words, it always brings a message of hope to the listener.
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about music and how easy it is to listen with our soul and open our hearts. With our without words, it always brings a message of hope to the listener.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2018
Comment from Tina Crute
That is a poem I will remember! I love the first line! I imagine our soul singing based on the heart's desires. The whole presentation here is beautiful; the colors and font and words all combine to provide the reader an image of dreaminess, and wanting to dig deep and let their soul sing:) I am voting for you, whoever you are!
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That is a poem I will remember! I love the first line! I imagine our soul singing based on the heart's desires. The whole presentation here is beautiful; the colors and font and words all combine to provide the reader an image of dreaminess, and wanting to dig deep and let their soul sing:) I am voting for you, whoever you are!
Comment Written 17-Oct-2018
Comment from Poetic Friend
As a music lover, I REALLY enjoy this poem. In its brevity, you captured the essence of music and why we listen to it.
We listen with our souls, and the music voices our thoughts.
This should do well in the contest. I have to remember to vote.
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As a music lover, I REALLY enjoy this poem. In its brevity, you captured the essence of music and why we listen to it.
We listen with our souls, and the music voices our thoughts.
This should do well in the contest. I have to remember to vote.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2018
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Music is our heart's language, what a beautiful line, your words brought the music and my heart is now singing, a joy to read and good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
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Music is our heart's language, what a beautiful line, your words brought the music and my heart is now singing, a joy to read and good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Oct-2018
Comment from meeshu
I enjoyed reading this work a great deal. The imagery is fantastic even in this short form. Well done, Mystery Writer. 'our hearts language', I like that..
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018
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I enjoyed reading this work a great deal. The imagery is fantastic even in this short form. Well done, Mystery Writer. 'our hearts language', I like that..
Comment Written 17-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018
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So pleased you enjoyed. Thanks so much. :))
Comment from Dean Kuch
It's hard to deny that when we're having a bad day or one where we are simply down in the dumps a bit, when one of our favorite tunes comes on the radio it immediately lifts our spirits.
Music has that unique, uncanny ability to transport us to another place and time.
I cannot write a word of poetry myself unless some sort of music is softly playing in the background--usually classical.
Great 5/7/5 poem on the persuasive powers of music.
Best of luck to you.
~Dean
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018
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It's hard to deny that when we're having a bad day or one where we are simply down in the dumps a bit, when one of our favorite tunes comes on the radio it immediately lifts our spirits.
Music has that unique, uncanny ability to transport us to another place and time.
I cannot write a word of poetry myself unless some sort of music is softly playing in the background--usually classical.
Great 5/7/5 poem on the persuasive powers of music.
Best of luck to you.
~Dean
Comment Written 17-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018
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You're on the monet, Dean. Sometimes the only rescue is that particular song. Thanks so much. :))
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
All my life I have loved music and desired to be able to write songs. I never knew where songwriters received their inspiration. You explain it. They feel it in their soul.
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All my life I have loved music and desired to be able to write songs. I never knew where songwriters received their inspiration. You explain it. They feel it in their soul.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2018
Comment from hari anand
Wow wonderful, music beats as our heart's language, to live one must sing along....loved it, up to the mark as always, thank you sir for entering this one,
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Wow wonderful, music beats as our heart's language, to live one must sing along....loved it, up to the mark as always, thank you sir for entering this one,
Comment Written 17-Oct-2018
Comment from Gloria ....
Very nice short poem, author. And so much truth in your words that in order to live you gotta sing along.
A fine presentation and great entry into the contest.
I wish you great luck in the booths.
Gloria
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Very nice short poem, author. And so much truth in your words that in order to live you gotta sing along.
A fine presentation and great entry into the contest.
I wish you great luck in the booths.
Gloria
Comment Written 17-Oct-2018
