Comment from tempeste

Exceptional

Ciao mystery writer!

I gave you your first vote ..first of many I hope ..It was such a touching story..

If there would only be more people like Harry....but most ,including myself (far too often ), are just self centered.

A bit more love, compassion for our neighbours would be beneficial for everyone..I believe in karmic energy ..the good you do will always return to you.

I hope remembering your story will help me be a better person .

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2018

Thanks for review and sparkly stars. People don't seem to realize the joy created( on both sides) when we think of others. I always try to find those moments when I can create happiness with random acts of compassion. Cheers, j

Comment from fm wright

Exceptional

A beautifully written modern fable with an extremely wonderful moral. I enjoyed reading it from beginning to end. It is a wonderful entry for this contest and I wish you success with it.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2018

Thanks for the encouraging review and sparkly stars. It was a fun write. Cheers, j

reply by fm wright on 16-Oct-2018

It came across like it was fun to write and you're welcome.

Comment from humpwhistle

Excellent

A lovely story of spontaneous and un-begrudging kindness.
Well-written. Succinct and clear.
We could all use such a thoughtful roommate.
Best of luck at the polls.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2018

Thanks for the insightful review. Yes, a little more compassion please.