Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

Be known, never look to the right or left, but ever and always have faith and trust in Lord and look straight on Him for He is always there to help you out in all state and courses of living; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

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 Comment Written 16-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2018

Thank you for the great review and very nice/true comments! Blessings, Teri

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

This is a great presentation, Teri. I love the art you chose for your words of wisdom. Good job with the correct syllable count per line as required. You have 575 although fewer would be acceptable, too. Your message is loud and clear. In our troubled world, we all need to remember your words. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan

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 Comment Written 16-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2018

Thank you so much my friend for the great review and very nice/true comments. When it says 5-7-5 contest I am always unsure if I can do less. Thanks for letting me know my friend! Blessings, Teri

reply by Jannypan (Jan) on 16-Oct-2018

Hi Teri

For HAIKU only is it acceptable to write fewer than 17 syllables in a short/log/short format.

For 575 always follow that format.

I hope I didn't mislead you.