Left? Right? Are You Unsure?
5-7-5 poem contest entry22 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
HI Teri, this is a poem sweet girl with a wonderful message...and I know Jesus is smiling just reading it...we have to keep our eyes on Him or we will sink...He will lead us when we are lost...what a wonderful poem ...my wonderful friend...and I love this picture...beautiful...very nicely written...love you much...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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HI Teri, this is a poem sweet girl with a wonderful message...and I know Jesus is smiling just reading it...we have to keep our eyes on Him or we will sink...He will lead us when we are lost...what a wonderful poem ...my wonderful friend...and I love this picture...beautiful...very nicely written...love you much...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 21-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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Thank you so much my friend for the great review and very nice comments! Blessings and love! Teri
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you are so welcome sweet angel...always...love and blessings to you...xxoo
Comment from Boogienights
A very uplifting poem with the idea that we need to keep our eyes on the lord, so that we can remove ourselves from the evils of the world. We should remember that if we do turn our eyes away and stray from the path...that God Grant's forgiveness if asked.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2018
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A very uplifting poem with the idea that we need to keep our eyes on the lord, so that we can remove ourselves from the evils of the world. We should remember that if we do turn our eyes away and stray from the path...that God Grant's forgiveness if asked.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2018
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Thank you so much for the great review and very true comments! Blessings! Teri
Comment from Spitfire
I'll take this figuratively. Not the best advice when deciding to drive or cross the street. LOL
Good use of assonance with Christ and right.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2018
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I'll take this figuratively. Not the best advice when deciding to drive or cross the street. LOL
Good use of assonance with Christ and right.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2018
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Thank you for the great review and very nice comments! Blessings! Teri
Comment from meeshu
I enjoyed reading this work a great deal. The imagery is fantastic even in this short form. Well done, Teri. focus on what can be seen..................meeshu
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2018
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I enjoyed reading this work a great deal. The imagery is fantastic even in this short form. Well done, Teri. focus on what can be seen..................meeshu
Comment Written 18-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2018
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Thank you for the great review and very nice comments mesh. Blessings, Teri
Comment from Ben Colder
I love the song TURN YOUR EYES TOWARD JESUS. It says all you are bringing forth in this poem. It is a good contest entry . My blessings to you . I hope you win. I will look for it.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018
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I love the song TURN YOUR EYES TOWARD JESUS. It says all you are bringing forth in this poem. It is a good contest entry . My blessings to you . I hope you win. I will look for it.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018
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Thank you Ben for the great review and very nice comments. I am not in the contest any longer due to not wording it correctly! Blessings, Teri
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So the committee got you. I shall return to fight another day!
Comment from Tia Attwood
Hi
This is a great little 5'7'5 poem. I am a little concerned as you have stated above that it is a 5'7'5 contest entry poem, yet down bellow i see that you have entered this into a Haiku poetry contest and it's not a Haiku poem but a Senryu poem.
I think you need to place a Haiku poem in here and re-post this in a 5'7'5 contest or senryu.
great job
regards
Tia
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018
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Hi
This is a great little 5'7'5 poem. I am a little concerned as you have stated above that it is a 5'7'5 contest entry poem, yet down bellow i see that you have entered this into a Haiku poetry contest and it's not a Haiku poem but a Senryu poem.
I think you need to place a Haiku poem in here and re-post this in a 5'7'5 contest or senryu.
great job
regards
Tia
Comment Written 17-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018
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Thank you for the great review, comments and help! Blessings, Teri
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Hi Teri,
I respect the impact of the chosen words and explanation in the extended notes.
Wherever there is need and a prayer is offered God will be by our side.
Indeed always look to Him for love and guidance and above all have the faith to believe He will never fail you.
Blessings
Shirley
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018
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Hi Teri,
I respect the impact of the chosen words and explanation in the extended notes.
Wherever there is need and a prayer is offered God will be by our side.
Indeed always look to Him for love and guidance and above all have the faith to believe He will never fail you.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 17-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018
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Thank you so much Shirley for the great review and very nice/true comments! Blessings, Teri
Comment from CD Richards
When I saw the title of this poem, I thought it was going to be about political fence-sitters ;-) An unusual topic for a haiku, which are most often nature related. In any case, the syllable count and format are spot on. Best of luck in the contest, Teri!
Craig
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018
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When I saw the title of this poem, I thought it was going to be about political fence-sitters ;-) An unusual topic for a haiku, which are most often nature related. In any case, the syllable count and format are spot on. Best of luck in the contest, Teri!
Craig
Comment Written 17-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018
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Thank you Craig for the great review and comments. I think I probably lost this contest as it is not about nature. Oh well! Thank you my friend! Blessings, Teri
Comment from Aussie
I would have said "Jesus Christ, He is my love," it comes across with a personal relationship, my love sounds familiar as man and women. I know you are restricted by word count. I wish you well in the Haiku contest my friend. XXK.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018
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I would have said "Jesus Christ, He is my love," it comes across with a personal relationship, my love sounds familiar as man and women. I know you are restricted by word count. I wish you well in the Haiku contest my friend. XXK.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018
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Thank you for the great review and nice comments. Thanks for the help also! Blessings, Teri
Comment from lyenochka
You're so right. This reminds me of that verse in Isaiah (I think) where it says we will hear a voice telling us which way to go and we should stray to the right or left.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018
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You're so right. This reminds me of that verse in Isaiah (I think) where it says we will hear a voice telling us which way to go and we should stray to the right or left.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018
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Thank you so much for the great review and comments. I think we are blessed to have the Holy Spirit to lead, guide and direct us in our daily walk. Blessings, Teri
