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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from damommy
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Precious picture. I like the rhythm of this poem, and the names Zither and Zother. I wonder how old the babies are when they strike out on their own? Cute and jaunty, and a pleasure to read.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018
    Thanks, da
Comment from nomi338
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Twin boys can sometimes bring joys, other times they can bring tears. It all depends upon what mischief they decide to get into at the moment. The bigger problem is that when they are twins, even if you see one doing wrong you might not know right away which one is which so you beat them both with a sturdy switch.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018
    Even if you?re wrong, you?re half right.
Comment from lyenochka
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Alas, so much of the animals in the world do have fathers like that. I guess wallabies are like that. Adorable picture!

I wonder if you meant 'were' in
"we're to bid '

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2018
    I fixt it.
Comment from Gloria ....
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What cute little animals, honestly even though the one looks a bit surprised. lol

and dadabies is a terrifically inventive rhyme.

Great job, Bill. :)

gloria

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2018
    Thanks again, Gloria
Comment from frogbook
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They are so darling-sounds as if they are lucky to have each other! Thanks for another trip to one of the interesting Bill Worlds.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2018
    Thanks, FB
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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He he he, this is so cute and I love your wording, so warm and sentimental and my favourite here is 'Zither or Zother'! Great words! Genius write Bill, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2018
    Thanks, Dolly
Comment from Ulla
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Awe, Bill look at that picture!!! Never mind their dynamics, aren't they just too sweet? You can almost feel the protectiveness. I liked the poem a lot. You are so good a these. All best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2018
    Thanks, Ulla
Comment from judiverse
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What a delightful looking pair. Clever rhyme in this. I love the names of Zither and Zother. Mom and Dad wallaby are probably just interested in creating more wallabies. It's bye-bye to Zither and Zother. They're on their own. Mombies and dadabies--cute words. judi

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2018
    Thanks, Judi
reply by judiverse on 16-Oct-2018
    You're welcome. judi
Comment from Sally Law
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It's nice to see the tender side of you, Rambo. My twin grandsons in wallaby form! They will scream with laughter when they see this photo. Very well done!
All my best,
Sally

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2018
    I billed these as wallabies, but I think the left one is a kangaroo and the right a wallaby.
reply by Sally Law on 16-Oct-2018
    Well...still sweet.
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very cute and adorable poem about the Wallaby family. I love the picture you used to go with your cute words. I always enjoy reading and reviewing these. Thanks for the smile this morning! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2018


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2018
    Thanks, Teri