The Adulteress
Jesus saves Mary Magdalene16 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
OH Kace, I love this poem my sweet friend...
I have gotten so into my Bible now...I know it is what God wants us to do...learn of Him...I know of the story told...so very well written Sweetie Pie...and sooooo very true...this should have won...beautifully written girl...and the picture says it all...love you girl...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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OH Kace, I love this poem my sweet friend...
I have gotten so into my Bible now...I know it is what God wants us to do...learn of Him...I know of the story told...so very well written Sweetie Pie...and sooooo very true...this should have won...beautifully written girl...and the picture says it all...love you girl...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 21-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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Hello my dear friend, Thanks so much for your kind review. glad you are reading the Word. Blessings, Kace.
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Hi Kace, hello Sweetie Pie...you are always so welcome...and Blessings to you as well...love you much...Linda xxoo
Comment from N.K. Wagner
Outstanding retelling of the story of Jesus saving the adulteress. Your set-up gives the reader a good sense of the crowd's change of attitude and the main characters' emotions. Well done. :) Nancy
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2018
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Outstanding retelling of the story of Jesus saving the adulteress. Your set-up gives the reader a good sense of the crowd's change of attitude and the main characters' emotions. Well done. :) Nancy
Comment Written 18-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2018
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Hello Wombat, Thanks so much for reviewing and the six shiny stars! Glad you got a good sense of the parable. Love, Kay.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
K, a good contender for the 75 words flash fiction contest. This is based on the stories told but I found it a great reminder that one should not judge or be hypocrite to their own values. "Let one of you that is without sin cast the first stone." - Love this line. Great job and best of luck in the competition. ~DD
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018
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K, a good contender for the 75 words flash fiction contest. This is based on the stories told but I found it a great reminder that one should not judge or be hypocrite to their own values. "Let one of you that is without sin cast the first stone." - Love this line. Great job and best of luck in the competition. ~DD
Comment Written 16-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018
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Hello DD, Thanks so much for reading my friend. Glad you thought it a good contender. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from Sankey
Hi there fellow Aussie. Coming through looking for my reviewers that are still on FS. A lot have left sadly. You did a review for my autobiography (Little Dog That Wouldn't Let Go)some time back and I am preparing an Acknowledgement page of all my reviewers.Good quick story. We know Mary Magdalene was possessed of Seven spirits but I hope you don't mind if I comment to say we are not sure she was an Adulteress or even as one of the churches claims a Prostitute. There is no scripture actually says that. UNless some Modern Translation might have taken that liberty. My wife and I are both disabled. She has Cerebral palsy my stuff is all internal.Good picture as well.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018
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Hi there fellow Aussie. Coming through looking for my reviewers that are still on FS. A lot have left sadly. You did a review for my autobiography (Little Dog That Wouldn't Let Go)some time back and I am preparing an Acknowledgement page of all my reviewers.Good quick story. We know Mary Magdalene was possessed of Seven spirits but I hope you don't mind if I comment to say we are not sure she was an Adulteress or even as one of the churches claims a Prostitute. There is no scripture actually says that. UNless some Modern Translation might have taken that liberty. My wife and I are both disabled. She has Cerebral palsy my stuff is all internal.Good picture as well.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018
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Hello Sankey, Thanks for reading and your comments. I believe she was the woman "caught in adultery." Jesus forgave her, He said "Go and sin no more." Sorry you are both disabled, as am I - amputee. Blessings, K.
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OK lemme tell you a story about an Amputee that got fed up with the authorities asking for a Medical report everytime her Mobility Parking needed renewing...she said "Did they think grew a leg or something??" Hope not offended.
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I have heard many amputee jokes over the 36 years I have been legless. And, I don't drink? 👀
Comment from Gloria ....
Whoa you did a wonderful job with this, K. So many people stand in judgement of others when they themselves are guilty of much worse.
I wish you much luck with the Contest Committee with the gem.
Gloria
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018
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Whoa you did a wonderful job with this, K. So many people stand in judgement of others when they themselves are guilty of much worse.
I wish you much luck with the Contest Committee with the gem.
Gloria
Comment Written 15-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2018
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Hello glorious Gloria! Thanks so much for your kind review and shiny stars. Wanna be my deputy? Love, Kay.
Comment from Sasha
Lovely work with this 75 Words Flash Fiction contest entry. You did a great job with this and I sincerely wish you all the best in this contest too. This is one of my favorite stories from the Bible.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2018
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Lovely work with this 75 Words Flash Fiction contest entry. You did a great job with this and I sincerely wish you all the best in this contest too. This is one of my favorite stories from the Bible.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2018
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Thanks so much my friend. XXK.
Comment from mermaids
It is always refreshing to read this story about Jesus and Mary Magadelene. It shows Jesus with compassion and no judgement. Excellent flash fiction theme and I wish you well in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2018
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It is always refreshing to read this story about Jesus and Mary Magadelene. It shows Jesus with compassion and no judgement. Excellent flash fiction theme and I wish you well in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2018
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Thanks so much for reading my friend XXK.
Comment from Sally Law
Love this sweet and tender picture of a soul in need of forgiveness. You did a fine job within the 75 words. We all need what only Jesus can offer. All my best to you in the contest.
Sally
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2018
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Love this sweet and tender picture of a soul in need of forgiveness. You did a fine job within the 75 words. We all need what only Jesus can offer. All my best to you in the contest.
Sally
Comment Written 15-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2018
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Hello Sally, Thanks so much for reading and your kind comments. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your flash story, Aussie. You covered much ground in 75 words. Your picture choice is perfect. Your message is loud and clear. Good job and best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2018
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I enjoyed your flash story, Aussie. You covered much ground in 75 words. Your picture choice is perfect. Your message is loud and clear. Good job and best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 15-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2018
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Hello Jan, Thanks so much for your kind review and great comments. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from aryr
Good luck in the contest or hopes that you did well. Even though it was short it said so much. I liked the picture you used, it gave that sense of awe and hope. The story itself has been told many time but usually drawn out and lengthy, this was enjoyable and direct. Your narrative gave it strength. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2018
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Good luck in the contest or hopes that you did well. Even though it was short it said so much. I liked the picture you used, it gave that sense of awe and hope. The story itself has been told many time but usually drawn out and lengthy, this was enjoyable and direct. Your narrative gave it strength. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2018
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Hello my friend, Thanks so much for reading and your kind comments. Blessing, Kay.
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You are most welcome Kay, blessed be.
