Let the Children Come to Me
Star Trek Script (Re-Boot Crew)7 total reviews
Comment from Rikki66
I bow to your supreme knowledge. A real rocket scientist. This script I fear would have been too literary for the average Trekkie. As you know it resembles several stories from the original series and TNG. I loved it.
Rikki
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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I bow to your supreme knowledge. A real rocket scientist. This script I fear would have been too literary for the average Trekkie. As you know it resembles several stories from the original series and TNG. I loved it.
Rikki
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2020
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You, my friend, have been rummaging through 'my closet', haven't you?! LOL!! ;) :) This was, I think, one of the few scripts I took the time to do last year... maybe I'll attempt another one come summer! ;) :) I'm really glad you enjoyed it! ;) Thank you for those awesome stars and for dropping by... I'll be sure to have your iced tea waiting for your next visit! ;) Yvette
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Glad you said rummaging through your closet and not your drawers. I will be check the closet more often.
Rikki
Comment from apky
No doubt this is an excellent script and you put a lot in it.
I also found it very demanding in content itself but also in the length. Most reviewers here shun long scripts or posts irrespective of genre.
I wish you luck with this and with the full length one for the movie.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2018
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No doubt this is an excellent script and you put a lot in it.
I also found it very demanding in content itself but also in the length. Most reviewers here shun long scripts or posts irrespective of genre.
I wish you luck with this and with the full length one for the movie.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2018
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Thank you so very much for stopping by for the read and review, apky, I do so appreciate your taking the time to read through it! :) :) I actually enjoyed writing it, but, having never written a script before, I was just really surprised as to the amount of pages it took [even when the peripheral dialogue of minor characters/etc is completely left out as I did!] -- and, no worries, the movie thing was a joke. Again, I appreciate your time! :) You be sure to have a wonderful week ahead!! :) ;)
Comment from SLMorrical
I loved this. I felt like I was watching the original series. I just love Star Trek. My son called me a Trekkie, because I knew the call letters of the Enterprise. I still watch the series on Netflix. You should try and get this done as a movie. I think it would be great as a movie. Very well done. Keep writing.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2018
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I loved this. I felt like I was watching the original series. I just love Star Trek. My son called me a Trekkie, because I knew the call letters of the Enterprise. I still watch the series on Netflix. You should try and get this done as a movie. I think it would be great as a movie. Very well done. Keep writing.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2018
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Thank you so very much for stopping by for the read and review, SLMorrical, I do so appreciate your taking the time to read through it! :) :) I actually enjoyed writing it, but, having never written a script before, I was just really surprised as to the amount of pages it took [even when the peripheral dialogue of minor characters/etc is completely left out as I did!] -- again, I appreciate your time! :) You be sure to have a wonderful week ahead!! :) ;)
Comment from Sugarray77
You did an excellent job imagining and creating such a diverse/different entry than what we usually see here. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it and it seemed very polished and professional to me. Great job.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2018
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You did an excellent job imagining and creating such a diverse/different entry than what we usually see here. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it and it seemed very polished and professional to me. Great job.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2018
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Thank you so very much for stopping by for the read and review, Sugar Ray, I do so appreciate your taking the time to read through it! :) :) I actually enjoyed writing it, but, having never written a script before, I was just really surprised as to the amount of pages it took [even when the peripheral dialogue of minor characters/etc is completely left out as I did!] -- again, I appreciate your time, ma'am! :) You be sure to have a wonderful week ahead!! :) ;)
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
I dip in and out of the show and found this full of humour, it was very VERY well and authentically put together and it held my interest throughout. At this point I may restart watching regularly. I don't really have the time but I may just find it. This was fabulous work, so involved and fabulous and great notes, I really credit you for doing all of this kindest regards Meia :)
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2018
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I dip in and out of the show and found this full of humour, it was very VERY well and authentically put together and it held my interest throughout. At this point I may restart watching regularly. I don't really have the time but I may just find it. This was fabulous work, so involved and fabulous and great notes, I really credit you for doing all of this kindest regards Meia :)
Comment Written 15-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2018
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Thank you so very much for stopping by for the read and review, Meia, I do so appreciate your taking the time to read through it! :) :) I actually enjoyed writing it, but, having never written a script before, I was just really surprised as to the amount of pages it took [even when the peripheral dialogue of minor characters/etc is completely left out as I did!] -- again, I appreciate your time, ma'am! :) You be sure to have a wonderful week ahead!! :) ;)
Comment from Earl Corp
I don't consider myself a trekkie, but have seen every episode of TOS. There is a lot of work that goes into a script and it shows you put in the work here. Just one question, Is it supposed to be area instead of aria? Nice job.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
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I don't consider myself a trekkie, but have seen every episode of TOS. There is a lot of work that goes into a script and it shows you put in the work here. Just one question, Is it supposed to be area instead of aria? Nice job.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
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Hi Earl -- thanx for stopping by today! :) :) I do so very much your taking the time to read through my contest entry...I kinda figured no one would do so because of its length. :) :) And, yes, I did mean aria -- it is the latin word for playground or park or, in some translations, open space. Thanx for having my back though -- I very much appreciate it! :) :) Have a great week ahead! :)
Comment from tfawcus
An entertaining read. Your clear stage directions and crisp, snappy dialogue bring out the individual characteristics of each crew member and make it easy to visualise the scenes.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2018
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An entertaining read. Your clear stage directions and crisp, snappy dialogue bring out the individual characteristics of each crew member and make it easy to visualise the scenes.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2018
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Thank you so very much for stopping by for the read and review, Tony, I do so appreciate your taking the time to read through it! :) :) I actually enjoyed writing it, but, having never written a script before, I was just really surprised as to the amount of pages it took [even when the peripheral dialogue of minor characters/etc is completely left out as I did!] -- again, I appreciate your time, sir! :) You be sure to have a wonderful week ahead!! :) ;)
