Comment from Nanny 6

Excellent

LOL... I was just reading along about this wallaby... Enjoying the Rhyme and the humor. At the end of the story... I laughed out loud! Thanks for giving me a smile today LOL
Judy

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018

Thanks, Nanny, for giving this a look. Bill

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

Oh, no. Trouble among the Kangaroo and Wallaby. Can't they just get along? I hope the university doesn't discriminate between kangaroos and wallabies. Great rhyme and fun with your words. Collegy and wallaby are great, as is the laun-der-y. Kendall pays the price for his misdeed. Fun poem. judi

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018

Thanks, Judi

reply by judiverse on 14-Oct-2018

You're welcome. judi

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Where's Waldo springs to mind
I'd have done it backwards. So you could say jealous Waldo Wallaby was such a wannabe
This made me laugh...was it also how hot pockets were invented?
God bless

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018

Hmmm? Don't know.

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

LOL! That will teach him for cheating and murdering poor Waldo. I love the last line, lol, he's doing the laun-der-y. Excellent poem, Bill, full of humour and with a good moral too. Well done. :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018

Thanks, Sandra

Comment from Kay Seed

Excellent

This is a cleverly-written poem. At first I thought it sounded like it could be written as a children's book. Maybe it's more along the lines of Asap's fables though, haha! I like the rhyming of university and laundry. Good job!

-Kay

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018

Thanks, Kay

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

Some dirty dealings going on here, Bill. I always thought kangaroos were fairly benign characters. Obviously they have a darker side! Mind you - I do steer clear of some of the big old reds - they can have attitude!

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 Comment Written 14-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018

All in fun

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Ha ha ha, this is hilarious and so cleverly written although it does have a macabre undertone to it! But I do admire your story, very clever indeed, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 14-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018

Thanks, Dolly