Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

Such a shame jealousy got in the way of who was going to get the best schooling. Wallaby lost his life but Kendall paid the price. Payback from the grave.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2018

Thanks for giving this a look.

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Imitation may be a fine compliment, but not if the one imitating you decides to kill you and take your place. That I fear is taking imitation too far, With that thought in mind, I do my utmost to be so lousy that no one would ever want to imitate me or take my place. I may be miserable , but I am still alive and not murdered.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2018

There?s always someone lousier than we are, making us their dream persona.

Comment from frogbook

Excellent

Quite imaginitive and a bit evil if I do say so myself...that's why I liked it! Another great one that could only be from the pen of yourself.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2018

Thank you, FB, for the kind review. Bill

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hahaha, i love this, Bill. You always have a way with words. Great topic. Oh dear, he murdered him and now he's in prison.for life I presume. Well, suppose he deserved that. A fun poem all the same. All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2018

Thank you, Ulla

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

Love it when the murderer is caught. A clever story with fascinating rhyme and alliteration. Toxicology infers poor Waldo was poisoned. Am I right?

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2018

Thanks, Shari, for giving this a look. Yes, you?re right.

Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson

Excellent

lol, Hello there, Bill, This is hilarious, your poems always give me a good chuckle.
Great humor and rhyme. ~Kerry

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2018

Thanks, Kerry

reply by Kerry Foley Robinson on 15-Oct-2018

Welcome!

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Who knew that wallabies could be that treacherous and evil. Too bad all that toxicology learning didn't help poor Waldo from getting himself killed. Seems like those disguises are too easy to make.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018

I think kangaroos just comb their hair differently and slouch to look like a wallaby.

Comment from Earl Corp

Exceptional

This is pretty creative. It had everything a good poem should have; it rhymes, makes sense and a little extra added surprise - fraud and murder. Great job!

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018

Thanks, Earl. Those macropods are a handful

Comment from damommy

Excellent

Love the wording like college-y and laun-der-y. This one made me laugh. I wonder if doing prison laundry would be enough punishment. Good rhyming in this delightful story.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018

Thanks, da

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

A very funnily dark write here...guess you decided not to put any pic to accompany it in order to not 'indicate' any innocent kangaroos (or wallaby's)? :) :) Thanx for sharing! :) Yvette :)

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018

Thanks, Yvette