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FAMILY TIES.

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"ALL IN THE FAMILY."

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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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Just in one scene, in this script, the key message is stated, we are the children of God and we are supposed to live happily for each other and one another; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2018

Comment from Sugarray77
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Rhonnie, what a fun and uplifting verse. I enjoyed reading about the playing together and how families should have fun and also take time to lift each other up when needed. Good job on this creation.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2018