A Superior Lake
The greatest of all13 total reviews
Comment from Anntonette
Amazing! I didn't know you could use two images with one piece. I see lighthouses, I always associate lighthouses with ghosts but not this time, this makes me think of lighthouses keeping the lake at bay and guiding us to the superior lake. This deserved six stars!
- Anntonette
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
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Amazing! I didn't know you could use two images with one piece. I see lighthouses, I always associate lighthouses with ghosts but not this time, this makes me think of lighthouses keeping the lake at bay and guiding us to the superior lake. This deserved six stars!
- Anntonette
Comment Written 13-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
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Wow! Thanks so much for this great review and the six stars...it made my day! :)
Comment from rhonnie69
HELLO POET: I've never seen Lake Superior in real life. Now that I've viewed your posting here I wouldn't mind going some day and see it. I've imagined that while I'm standing there gazing at it I'll say: "WOW. I'm glad that poet inspired me to visit this spectacle." Thank you for sharing, poet. God bless you and yours. Cordially: rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
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HELLO POET: I've never seen Lake Superior in real life. Now that I've viewed your posting here I wouldn't mind going some day and see it. I've imagined that while I'm standing there gazing at it I'll say: "WOW. I'm glad that poet inspired me to visit this spectacle." Thank you for sharing, poet. God bless you and yours. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2018
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Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. You should come to Duluth Minnesota, a wonderful port city on a hill. Kind of like San Francisco but next to Lake Superior ...the best place to visit and live. Thanks again for reading.
Comment from AprilViolet
Such a beautifully written poem about a great and powerful lake. Love love love the pictures of both the power and the beauty! Definitely worth a 6 star rating!
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2018
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Such a beautifully written poem about a great and powerful lake. Love love love the pictures of both the power and the beauty! Definitely worth a 6 star rating!
Comment Written 13-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2018
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review and the six stars. I really appreciate it.
Comment from poesyapprentice
There was quite a bit of rhyme/near rhyme, but no steadfast pattern so you kept to the prompt instructions. I like the comparison, in both text and pics, but think it would have been more visually appealing if the lines were centered or something. A pretty straightforward piece. One of my favorite lines-- Cradling the Edmund Fitzgerald, where no poor souls were saved. Thank you for promoting and good luck.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2018
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There was quite a bit of rhyme/near rhyme, but no steadfast pattern so you kept to the prompt instructions. I like the comparison, in both text and pics, but think it would have been more visually appealing if the lines were centered or something. A pretty straightforward piece. One of my favorite lines-- Cradling the Edmund Fitzgerald, where no poor souls were saved. Thank you for promoting and good luck.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2018
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Thank you for such a nice review, It's always appreciated.
Comment from country ranch writer
Love beautiful lakes and all the things good it holds family time, fishing, swimming and picnicking. all good stuff to do and see just enjoying being together is best.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2018
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Love beautiful lakes and all the things good it holds family time, fishing, swimming and picnicking. all good stuff to do and see just enjoying being together is best.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2018
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You are right, of course! Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem.
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
I loved your photos and the story/descriptions of each, which show just how wild and unforgiving the storm waters can be and the bottom with the calm and serenity. Your nod to the Edmund Fitzgerald/watery grave is a heartfelt line. Well-written contest entry. Good luck.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2018
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I loved your photos and the story/descriptions of each, which show just how wild and unforgiving the storm waters can be and the bottom with the calm and serenity. Your nod to the Edmund Fitzgerald/watery grave is a heartfelt line. Well-written contest entry. Good luck.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2018
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Thank you so much for this great review. :)
Comment from Ann Marie Anglin
Great pictures! I remember a Gordon Lightfoot song that came out in the late 70s (?) about the wreck of the Edmund Fitzgerald. I love that song. The Great Lakes are something special. I used to own a home on Lake Ontario. They're like little inland oceans, creating their own weather systems. And Lake Superior, of course, is the most impressive of them all. Great poem! All the best, Ann Marie
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2018
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Great pictures! I remember a Gordon Lightfoot song that came out in the late 70s (?) about the wreck of the Edmund Fitzgerald. I love that song. The Great Lakes are something special. I used to own a home on Lake Ontario. They're like little inland oceans, creating their own weather systems. And Lake Superior, of course, is the most impressive of them all. Great poem! All the best, Ann Marie
Comment Written 12-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2018
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Thank you for reading my poem and for such a nice review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the biggest body of water on earth. The ocean have many secrets we do not know about. What we see with out eyes are already amazin enought to blow our minds.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
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A very well-written poem about the biggest body of water on earth. The ocean have many secrets we do not know about. What we see with out eyes are already amazin enought to blow our minds.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
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Thanks so much for reading my poem..its actually about one of the great lakes, but it definitely looks like an ocean because of its size..its the largest of the great lakes. Thanks again for the review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a tribute to this large body of water where there is much wildlife and the fishing sounds like fun too. We can never underestimate the power of such a lake, your words are resonating, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
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This is a tribute to this large body of water where there is much wildlife and the fishing sounds like fun too. We can never underestimate the power of such a lake, your words are resonating, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
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Thank you for this great review, I appreciate Kate it
Comment from Thomas Bowling
SUperior it's said, never gives up the dead, when the winds of November come early. A great song about a great lake. I used to live on the border of Lake Erie. It's a great place to live.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
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SUperior it's said, never gives up the dead, when the winds of November come early. A great song about a great lake. I used to live on the border of Lake Erie. It's a great place to live.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018
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You're right. Living by a great lake is special, Thank you so much for this great review
