Comment from rheabug

Excellent

Very creative is your writing here. You did the prompt proud by penning this poem. I did not know how to approach this one. Thank you for sharing with us here on fb. Hugs...

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018

So glad you enjoyed, rheabug -- was an interesting contest so I gave it a shot -- we'll see how it goes! :) :) Hugs back atcha -- Have a wonderful weekend! :) :)

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice image and presentation.
-Your syllable count is good,
and poems are a good pairing,
and written well.
-I like the two descriptions of
the cradle- one for nature;
one for the child and what
each has to offer.
-Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 11-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018

So glad you enjoyed, Pam -- was an interesting contest so I gave it a shot -- we'll see how it goes! :) :) Have a wonderful weekend! :) :)

reply by Pam (respa) on 12-Oct-2018

It was an interesting contest. You have a great weekend, too!

Comment from Cindy McIntyre

Excellent

What a wonderful set of 5-7-5's as a conversation with man and nature. One gives and one takes and then gives (a cycle). This is a solid contest entry. I hope you do well. Good luck!

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 Comment Written 11-Oct-2018

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2018

So glad you enjoyed, Cindy -- was an interesting contest so I gave it a shot -- we'll see how it goes! :) :) Have a wonderful weekend! :) :)